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Bird Flew

When Eve was searching for a rib The Devil led her to a crib Where Cain and Able Hatched a stork fable Creating the very first fib

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/25/2022 8:04:00 AM

The first BIG fib was Able's, as Caine was slain prior to the BIG fib.

Valsa George

Date: 5/23/2022 9:50:00 PM

So the two brothers were pioneers of many vices.... lie, betrayal, greed etc etc :) :)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/24/2022 10:23:00 AM

Storks find chimneys a great place to nest, so perhaps the smoke muddled their brains? Aloha!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/21/2022 4:49:00 PM

Ha! Love the ending, Rico! Very funny…

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/22/2022 10:38:00 AM

5,000-year-old funny business? Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2022 4:22:00 PM

Creative work. I wonder was it her rib that she was searching for or was it another one of Adam's ribs for which she was searching? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/22/2022 10:38:00 AM

Who knows? Aloha!