Bird Flew

When Eve was searching for a rib
The Devil led her to a crib
Where Cain and Able
Hatched a stork fable
Creating the very first fib
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 8:04 AM
The first BIG fib was Able's, as Caine was slain prior to the BIG fib.
George Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 9:50 PM
So the two brothers were pioneers of many vices.... lie, betrayal, greed etc etc :) :)
Leffanta Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Storks find chimneys a great place to nest, so perhaps the smoke muddled their brains? Aloha!
Bauer Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Ha! Love the ending, Rico! Very funny…
Leffanta Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 10:38 AM
5,000-year-old funny business? Aloha!
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Creative work. I wonder was it her rib that she was searching for or was it another one of Adam's ribs for which she was searching? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Leffanta Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Who knows? Aloha!
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