Bird Brain

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Bird Brain Now here is a strange pair of folk If one swallows, the other croaks Looks quite a tussle Bird wants to guzzle But the bullfrog hangs on, says nope Quitters Never Win Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico 19/5/2021

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Mark Koplin

Date: 5/25/2021 3:02:00 PM

I love that photo! Awesome, great limerick David

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/25/2021 3:12:00 PM

Thanks Mark, Whoever thought up that picture is pure genius, it evokes an impossible, unresolvable standoff, Cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/21/2021 6:53:00 AM

Lol! David, The photo caused you to write a good Limerick. I chose the same photo. I like what you came up with much better. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/21/2021 8:27:00 AM

Heya Alexis, thanks for that comment, I changed this one around several times, it’s a great picture prompt, hope Margarita likes it too, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 4:35:00 PM

absolutely brilliant i too chose this pic:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/21/2021 12:09:00 AM

Thanks Jan it’s a great picture prompt, I seen your excellent piece, and left comments, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/20/2021 3:57:00 PM

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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/21/2021 12:10:00 AM

Bit off more than he could chew