Bird Brain

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like David Kavanagh .

Bird Brain Now here is a strange pair of folk If one swallows, the other croaks Looks quite a tussle Bird wants to guzzle But the bullfrog hangs on, says nope Quitters Never Win Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico 19/5/2021

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/25/2021 3:02:00 PM

I love that photo! Awesome, great limerick David

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/25/2021 3:12:00 PM

Thanks Mark, Whoever thought up that picture is pure genius, it evokes an impossible, unresolvable standoff, Cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/21/2021 6:53:00 AM

Lol! David, The photo caused you to write a good Limerick. I chose the same photo. I like what you came up with much better. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/21/2021 8:27:00 AM

Heya Alexis, thanks for that comment, I changed this one around several times, it’s a great picture prompt, hope Margarita likes it too, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 4:35:00 PM

absolutely brilliant i too chose this pic:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/21/2021 12:09:00 AM

Thanks Jan it’s a great picture prompt, I seen your excellent piece, and left comments, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/20/2021 3:57:00 PM

Tweet , Tweet Twitter

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/21/2021 12:10:00 AM

Bit off more than he could chew