Birches

white paper birches shimmer in the soft breezes warm summer sighing May 22, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/25/2021 1:19:00 PM

Totally zen, relaxing, reminds me to appreciate the silence.

Jenna Logan

Date: 5/23/2021 2:20:00 PM

I've placed myself in your setting, and relaxing there. Well written, Milt.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/23/2021 4:30:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jenna. I'm glad I found a serene and peaceful place for your to relax. Write a poem while you are there...I did.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/22/2021 3:21:00 PM

Very nice. I love birch trees. Peaceful this is :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 7:30:00 PM

Thanks for your read, Heidi.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 5/22/2021 2:02:00 PM

Milton, this verse makes me want to lay on the grass, gaze at the clouds and ruminate. Soothing!--ab

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 7:30:00 PM

Thanks, Anselmo. So it does!