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Birch Tree

bare birch tree swaying blizzard blows away branches ~ chiding chickadee 5th December 2022 For Tania Kitchin's "Winter Nature Themed Haiku" contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/20/2022 11:10:00 AM

A beautiful snapshot of a winter day Jo. We have birch trees in our back yard. This is a perfect picture of them in the winter and the birds who feast on their seeds while clinging to the thin, leafless branches - a wonderful sight from my office window along with the hummingbird who feeds from the feeder! Congratulations. Merry Christmas!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2022 1:06:00 PM

a very well deserved win. Congrats

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/15/2022 8:26:00 AM

Sweet Jo. Congratulations on your win! :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/14/2022 2:50:00 AM

An alliterated haiku very clever Jo, who’d of thought (chiding chickadee) brilliant congratulations on top spot, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/13/2022 4:00:00 PM

Jo, congratulations on your first place win with your vivid haiku, love the imagery!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2022 5:08:00 AM

I like this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I am glad that we are not wrapped up in a blizzard. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 12/8/2022 7:49:00 AM

A perfect haiku.... !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2022 12:57:00 PM

love all the alliteration in this one!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/6/2022 6:09:00 AM

I am charmed Have good days