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Birch Tree


bare birch tree swaying
blizzard blows away branches ~
chiding chickadee


5th December 2022

For Tania Kitchin's "Winter Nature Themed Haiku" contest

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Sam Kauffman

December 20, 2022 at 11:10 AM

A beautiful snapshot of a winter day Jo. We have birch trees in our back yard. This is a perfect picture of them in the winter and the birds who feast on their seeds while clinging to the thin, leafless branches - a wonderful sight from my office window along with the hummingbird who feeds from the feeder! Congratulations. Merry Christmas!

Andrea Dietrich

December 15, 2022 at 1:06 PM

a very well deserved win. Congrats

Linda Alice Fowler

December 15, 2022 at 8:26 AM

Sweet Jo. Congratulations on your win! :)

David Kavanagh

December 14, 2022 at 2:50 AM

An alliterated haiku very clever Jo, who’d of thought (chiding chickadee) brilliant congratulations on top spot, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

December 13, 2022 at 4:00 PM

Jo, congratulations on your first place win with your vivid haiku, love the imagery!

Sara Kendrick

December 9, 2022 at 5:08 AM

I like this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I am glad that we are not wrapped up in a blizzard. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara