Birch

Sycamores certainly speak French, cypresses - ancient Greek, the Old Testament's olives are bilingual: they speak Hebrew and Aramaic. Birch is a Russian tree though growing in Canada. So small and frail (they wither abroad), already gone into a winter trance, she is silent but she is silent à la russe. That's how silent bears in dens are, that's how drunkards listen to the voice of the devils dissolved in their blood, that's how old believers pray, that's how a poet meditates on his faraway homeland and, finally, that's how silent my girlfriend was, accompanying me to the airport. What are we doing here, you and me, between fall and winter, at the crossroad of four Canadian corners?

a hush of partings 
of pursed lips and lonely hearts…
we should go home birch


10.12.2019
December Or January Haibun Contest Poetry Contest
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Date: 2/7/2020 7:03:00 PM
This is beautiful Kurt. It is very deserving of your first place win! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 2/7/2020 3:48:00 PM
Kurt, very imaginative! I enjoyed reading this... especially the line "the devils dissolved in their blood". Congrats on your well-deserved #1 placement ~ John
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Date: 12/14/2019 5:48:00 AM
Youe originality and depths in this new creation are tops my friend. Truly great poetry!. A fav..
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Date: 12/13/2019 7:53:00 AM
A lovely mix of words and thoughts! Enjoyed! Birch is such a pretty word... This could sail to the top!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/13/2019 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, Kimo, please, come again)
Date: 12/12/2019 2:07:00 PM
ohhh...not many readings do I take that cover my skin with goosebumps, but this one did. Whether in Russian, French, English or any language, the ache surfaces. Maybe it's because I once loved that drunkard who heeded the devil's voice, or perhaps I recall standing at that crossroads at an airport, wondering 'what am I doing here,' but your words opened memories door. So wonderfully expressed, Kurt.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/13/2019 3:13:00 AM
Reader's goosebumps are the best and truest reward for a writer. Thank you so much, Lin.
Date: 12/10/2019 8:49:00 AM
This is so cool and original. Bravo Kurt.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 12/13/2019 3:13:00 AM
Thank you, Richard)
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