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blossom sprouts unfold flowers thaw into honeycomb ~ coupling pulses brim Written: August 13, 2022 Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2022 4:45:00 PM

Great entry for the contest my friend. I like the movement within the Haiku. Have a great week! Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/17/2022 4:50:00 AM

A really original haiku, Dear Poet. "flowers thaw into honeycomb" - love this image! Warm wishes ~ Mala

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/15/2022 4:44:00 AM

That is a hymn to nature's beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! A winner!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2022 3:04:00 AM

Up close the honeybee is so beautiful, but lookers be aware. Just the thought of a sting scares me. I enjoyed reading this one which to me is a great contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and visiting my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2022 7:16:00 AM

Beautiful blossoming haiku my friend. Win BIG!

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2022 7:48:00 PM

Wow.... a fantastic haiku, dear poet friend ! I foresee it as a top winner ! All the Best