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Darkness and self-awareness drive me chaste. But it has naught on musings upon life's haste. I'm in abeyance due to the wrinkles in the mirror. Once I grow anile, I ache to be born as a hearer. Silently trusting oneself to physical reality It built me as a kaleidoscope to raise my vitality. A hidden gem, pent entirely for my own whole. A sketch viewed my dough, strength, ego, and soul. I oft dread resting in my comfortable bed. Why am I here while everyone else is not? They received a deadly blow to the head. With it all, I reside in this abandoned lot. A smudged mirror hinders the sight of beauty. The essence of a sparkling heart is its depth. Ripples absorb love as raging wells of duty. Break the mirror; pledge never to split breadth. Our spirits urge us to once draw and push away. We love and hate our bodies at the same time. What should we do now that we've gone astray? Let's release our suffering and rotten grime. Overloaded with innumerable happenings, gas explosions, abrupt crashes, and illness On a thawed pond raft, were careless things. flailing in pain, a chary swimmer, and weakness. Experiments outside of one's own body What impact will individuals undergo? Have they overdone it and stayed shoddy? Is it terrifying to flinch back from a blow? It was poised, hazy green, and serene. having a wonderful feeling of calmness. Slowly approaching the slope, blaze between. Grasping the chest, unable to remain or lean. Don't send me back to life; I'm begging you. I sobbed and felt pain before calming down. I'm back in my body and have lost my peace too. I am alive now; one day heaven will be my town.
Written: March 2023 Break the mirror Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 3/6/2023 12:07:00 PM
I really appreciate your writing. This was beautiful.
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