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Binge

His boredom conquered discipline again; a bridge thus built has no one else to blame. A blazing dumpster fire bloomed from within, like breathing, birth unnoticed when it came. Audacious that a button made of cork might detonate and on his soul impinge. Believe not blood, instead apply the torque, and so begins another drinking binge.
—————— Thought I’d try to use all the B words to describe one…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 4/12/2023 2:48:00 PM
Intriguing word connects, I like how this came out, nicely done :)
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:34:00 PM
Lots of images going on here Jeff. In these few lines is the mind's dark handiwork. Well done! :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 5:51:00 PM
The poem takes one into a sad world . An inspired write Jeff. "Button made of cork might detonate" an example...a great image.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/26/2023 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much for comments on my odd poems… Glad this draws from a greatly distant past!

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