Bilocation

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Feb 5, 2024    9:32 pm

Half of my heart belongs to you Near or far, we’re one not two As mine beats fast and so is yours Bilocated under the radar of one love’s source. You give me yours when I gave mine Parting ways come to nought when hearts entwine Across the miles, you’re all in my dreams, in mind Insta and FB walls are big posts for you, Happy Valentines!

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Date: 2/8/2024 1:49:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Bilocation" write. Being miles away is hard...  Have a wonderful/happy day..................
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Len Gasun
Date: 2/10/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for your precious time to read my poem my dear poet friend Paula. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for your uplifting words too. You are right dear, being miles aways is hard, that's why I always try my best to keep in touch with my family. TYVVM again and have a wonderful/happy day too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 2/8/2024 7:02:00 AM
Dear sweet Len, such a delightful, romantic poem to read and enjoy. Perfect for this month too! I especially love the line, ‘ Bilocated under the radar of one’s love source’. So lovely! Really enjoyed this beautiful love poem. Hope you have a happy Valentines Day and keep well. Big hugs to you my lovely friend xx
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Len Gasun
Date: 2/10/2024 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend Christina for your precious time reading my poem and your uplifting comments. TYTYVVM. Yeah, I hope so my dear poet friend. For now I'm still under medication of terrible allergies. Big hugs to you too and hope we'll both have a happy Valentines Day. Sending my best wishes with love. God bless you always
Date: 2/5/2024 3:48:00 AM
This is very creatively done Len, gl in the contest, :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 2/7/2024 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet friend MRose. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 2/5/2024 3:24:00 AM
Awwn this is so sweet and beautiful how youv written this in the most soul touching manner. I love the way youv interpreted the prompt and expressed love in the most creative manner. Especially love the lines “ Near or far, we’re one not two” how touching! Pleasure reading your work always dear talented soul! Keep sharing and shining and i hope youll feel better soon too
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Len Gasun
Date: 2/7/2024 10:57:00 PM
Hello my dear poet friend Ink. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your wonderful/encouraging comments. With God's help I feel better now but not totally because of the high smog/pollution right now. (pm 2.5 is 110 today and yesterday was 102 which was always bad for me and my allergies. Thanks a lot for your unwavering support. Abundant blessings be to you in everything. Hugs
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