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Written: January 26, 2024 ____________________________________________ Rumi Quote ("Goodbyes are only for those who love with their eyes. Because, for those who love with heart and soul, there is no such thing as separation.") All beings carry an inner flame, a divine spark, Our goal is to allow light to shine within dark. Everyone has a stiff gift, talent, or skill to share, Serving others makes our souls elysian to dare. Acts of love and caring could offer us delight, By exhibiting warmth, not schist and phyllite. It is our collective effort to improve life-earth, When our soul's task is what drives us to birth, We feel content and halcyon in our actual sense, We are aware that we are shifting our presence. Beyond everything else, this ought to be crucial, Aversely relishing awards of hustle for frugal. Spirit is a passenger on an arduous path, An odyssey spanning countless sides of wrath. Soul grows and evolves with its realness, And draws nearer to its trustworthy purpose. Spirit vision is to testify that it is divine, To meld in a sumptuous root, letting it shine. Doing so implies soul concedes vanity, And wholeheartedly embrace its core chirality. Embracing an ethereal embedded element, Fulfill fair function, fixing forthright firmament. Realizing we're not the dreaming dual drama, Bilocation hints to grasp a restive soul's lama. The path of a spirit can be filled with faintness, Yet it regularly bestows layers of greatness. Following death, psyche gains fresh insight, It blooms and grows in power and oblivion rite. Spirit will ultimately fulfill its destiny, And shall be united with its roots celestially. But, in any case, the soul persists in its path, Expanding and maturing with every wrath.

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Date: 1/27/2024 12:08:00 PM
An interesting take on the contest dear Sotto, is a poignant meditation on the spiritual dimensions of existence, reminding us of our interconnectedness with the cosmos and the enduring quest for meaning and fulfilment that defines the human condition. Through its lyrical language and profound insights, the poem invites readers to embark on a journey of self-discovery and spiritual awakening, illuminating the path toward enlightenment and wholeness...
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Date: 1/27/2024 5:51:00 AM
Your take on the Rumi quote shines in your poetic prowess my friend. Thoughtful depiction, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/27/2024 3:22:00 AM
Halcyon is a fave word. The 3 lines of alliteration in the 6th stanza sound mesmeric :)
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Date: 1/26/2024 2:20:00 PM
a thought-provoking and philosophical poem filled with insight and wisdom. I seriously enjoyed every line...each one flowed smoothly into the next connecting ideas and thoughts succinctly. I especially liked this verse: The path of a spirit can be filled with faintness, Yet it regularly bestows layers of greatness. Following death, psyche gains fresh insight, It blooms and grows in power and oblivion rite. I agree with Richard, this is an existential masterpiece. Much to ponder as I move on.
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Date: 1/26/2024 2:13:00 PM
An existential masterpiece my friend. Much to consider here.
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