David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

Billy and the Kids

climbing sheer rock face 
   for sure footed mountain goats 
           a walk in the park


Favorite Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France 
03/09/2021 how many syllables 5/7/5

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Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 8:30 PM David, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance David Kavanagh September 9, 2021 at 1:18 AM Thank you Constance, I'm delighted you enjoyed my light hearted haiku, thank you for the win, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2021 at 8:08 PM love the clever "phrase" play! Congrats David Kavanagh September 6, 2021 at 3:00 AM Thank you Andrea, was just waiting to be plucked from the ether, cheers David

Greg Gaul September 3, 2021 at 7:14 PM Quite clever title David. A touch of humor with the last line makes this an easy choice for high placement. Congrats. David Kavanagh September 4, 2021 at 3:02 AM Heya Greg, it was a toss up between nanny and billy for the title, of course it had to be billy, the rest slotted into place quite readily, cheers David

Sotto Poet September 3, 2021 at 3:15 PM Greatly crafted Haiku, David congratulations on your top win David Kavanagh September 4, 2021 at 3:00 AM Thank you Lasaad, always great to get a little recognition, I particularly liked this one myself, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2020 at 7:46 PM Love it...the title and all! David Kavanagh February 24, 2020 at 1:44 AM Thank you Kim you’re very kind cheers David

Daniel Turner February 23, 2020 at 4:56 PM This is excellent, David. Made me smile:) David Kavanagh February 23, 2020 at 5:00 PM Thank you Daniel glad you enjoyed cheers David