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Billy and the Kids

climbing sheer rock face for sure footed mountain goats a walk in the park Favorite Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 03/09/2021 how many syllables 5/7/5

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Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 8:30:00 PM

David, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/9/2021 1:18:00 AM

Thank you Constance, I'm delighted you enjoyed my light hearted haiku, thank you for the win, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2021 8:08:00 PM

love the clever "phrase" play! Congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/6/2021 3:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, was just waiting to be plucked from the ether, cheers David

Greg Gaul

Date: 9/3/2021 7:14:00 PM

Quite clever title David. A touch of humor with the last line makes this an easy choice for high placement. Congrats.

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/4/2021 3:02:00 AM

Heya Greg, it was a toss up between nanny and billy for the title, of course it had to be billy, the rest slotted into place quite readily, cheers David