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Billy and the Kids

climbing sheer rock face for sure footed mountain goats a walk in the park Favorite Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 03/09/2021 how many syllables 5/7/5

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Date: 9/8/2021 8:30:00 PM
David, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/9/2021 1:18:00 AM
Thank you Constance, I'm delighted you enjoyed my light hearted haiku, thank you for the win, cheers David
Date: 9/5/2021 8:08:00 PM
love the clever "phrase" play! Congrats
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Date: 9/6/2021 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, was just waiting to be plucked from the ether, cheers David
Date: 9/3/2021 7:14:00 PM
Quite clever title David. A touch of humor with the last line makes this an easy choice for high placement. Congrats.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/4/2021 3:02:00 AM
Heya Greg, it was a toss up between nanny and billy for the title, of course it had to be billy, the rest slotted into place quite readily, cheers David
Date: 9/3/2021 3:15:00 PM
Greatly crafted Haiku, David congratulations on your top win
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/4/2021 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad, always great to get a little recognition, I particularly liked this one myself, cheers David
Date: 2/23/2020 7:46:00 PM
Love it...the title and all!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/24/2020 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Kim you’re very kind cheers David
Date: 2/23/2020 4:56:00 PM
This is excellent, David. Made me smile:)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/23/2020 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Daniel glad you enjoyed cheers David

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