Bill

There was an old fella called Bill, Who joined dating sites for a thrill, But he failed to impress Anything in a dress: At ninety he’s over the hill. For Scott’s Hill contest

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/22/2014 9:19:00 AM

Here we go, Tweets away. Best of luck.

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/14/2014 9:39:00 AM

If if went to Sun City with all those retiree widows... He'd be hittin gold... LOL... Just looking in the wrong places...

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 8:03:00 PM

Ah! Jack! I didn't even think of that hill!!!.. Very clever.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2014 3:47:00 PM

Way to go, my friend. Wish I had done a funny one like this one. I didn't make the list with my etheree!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:33:00 PM

Jack,, the hills are alive with poetry, that's how it goes. Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 2:48:00 AM

Unique amazing take on theme,, well penned Jack! Congrats on win!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/7/2014 8:24:00 PM

Jack mate, I thought this might be you. What fun. Even though you did not place in the top three, I'd like to Tweet a link anyway, if I may?

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/7/2014 8:08:00 PM

Ha! Enjoyed this different take on the contest. Congrats. BG

Paul Callus

Date: 7/7/2014 5:03:00 PM

A witty unique take on this theme, Jack! Congrats on your win. // paul

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/7/2014 11:20:00 AM

Great slant on this contest; love the humor. Congratulations.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2014 10:37:00 AM

Ha-ha! What a unique approach to the Hill contest. If Bill still needs companionship, send him my way. Older gentlemen are always welcome in my house. Best wishes in the contest, dear! Love, carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/17/2014 7:46:00 AM

This made me smile, didn't expect that last line, Jack-- hmm who knows? He might still attract somebody? Nice to hear from you, we're relatively well, thank you and also, thanks for dropping by with your kind words and I hope all is well with you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2014 10:47:00 PM

hey, now THAT was original. Using that expression over the hill. You are SO clever, my friend. I am already over the hill, so he had to be over the MOUNTAIN.

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/15/2014 7:05:00 PM

Ole' Bill needs a pill to recapture the thrill. So the girls will still treat him with kindness. Cause you know what they say. If you do it yourself, it can sure end up leading to blindness. :)