Bill

There was a love bird named Bill
he liked to sun on the sill 
himself admiring
he was so charming
until he had a big spill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Poor Bill. You have described him well in only five lines.
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 5:21 AM
ty Robert birds are fun Shadow x smile hug
Sivey Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Ha ha, lol, this is a very funny write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! I love a good bird poem, they are fascinating creatures! What an exceptional piece, Great Work!!
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:34 AM
ty Russell birds are great entertainers Shadow x smile hug
Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Quite apt Limerick creating light humor, Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:33 AM
ty Ram happy you liked it Shadow x smile hug
Smith Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:31 PM
Very cute Shadow. I wrote many Limericks in my HS days. I wish I could find them...I really enjoyed this piece...Tim
Hamilton Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:32 AM
hi Tim ty very much Shadow x smile hug
Price Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:13 PM
I love animal poems and I really liked this one! It had a funny element to it lol
Hamilton Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:19 PM
ty lol yes it does Kira I like writing about animals and nature glad you liked it Shadow x smile huc
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