Bill

There was a love bird named Bill he liked to sun on the sill himself admiring he was so charming until he had a big spill

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2014 5:11:00 PM

Poor Bill. You have described him well in only five lines.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2014 5:21:00 AM

ty Robert birds are fun Shadow x smile hug

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/27/2014 10:22:00 PM

Ha ha, lol, this is a very funny write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! I love a good bird poem, they are fascinating creatures! What an exceptional piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2014 11:34:00 AM

ty Russell birds are great entertainers Shadow x smile hug

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2014 8:32:00 PM

Quite apt Limerick creating light humor, Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2014 11:33:00 AM

ty Ram happy you liked it Shadow x smile hug

Tim Smith

Date: 1/27/2014 8:31:00 PM

Very cute Shadow. I wrote many Limericks in my HS days. I wish I could find them...I really enjoyed this piece...Tim

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2014 11:32:00 AM

hi Tim ty very much Shadow x smile hug

Kira Price

Date: 1/27/2014 8:13:00 PM

I love animal poems and I really liked this one! It had a funny element to it lol

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/27/2014 8:19:00 PM

ty lol yes it does Kira I like writing about animals and nature glad you liked it Shadow x smile huc