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we only gave each other a standing cheering when we parted ways.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 8/2/2021 1:50:00 AM

WoW! Lasaad, This is another well-executed one-liner. I echo what David said. Well done:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/23/2021 2:38:00 AM

One of your best Lasaad, I like the way you twisted the standing ovation into, the complete opposite of what we would normally associate it with, exquisite penning cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/23/2021 8:23:00 AM

Thank you so much David, appreciate your kind words, have a blessed day.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/22/2021 9:09:00 AM

With emphasis placed on different words, this line can be read over and over and have new meanings each time. Fine work, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/22/2021 3:58:00 PM

Thanks for your delightful comment Milton, poetry is the mind gymnastics.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/22/2021 5:34:00 AM

Very interesting. ;0)

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/22/2021 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Rich, I’m glad you find it interesting, best regards to you

Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 7/22/2021 5:24:00 AM

I can read this as suggested by the title and I can also read this as a transition to a solidarity resolution; one of the bilateral switches that I enjoy about this piece. I like the way this reads and presents as a more classic koan rhythm and dipolar pattern by omitting the word "a" in the first line--wondering if that also fits how you feel about meaning and resonance.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/22/2021 4:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for you delightful comment, indeed poetry could be a mind gymnastics, the (a) is added for syllables count, in the one line Monoku 17 syllables are required, but will try a different version and le you know, appreciate your kindness abd thoughts.