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Biggest Mistake

my biggest mistake you must agree is thinking I was able to write poetry i try very hard really do my best when it comes to the crunch I fail the test couplets I like to write trying not to make it sound too trite haiku oh my this really does try my brain... like rain in summer I will keep writing prose practice makes perfect, I suppose penned. 7 July 2016

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Joe Dimino

Date: 7/30/2016 2:30:00 PM

Yet all olfactory is not in the nose. Your spirit delights. Excellent write!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2016 6:43:00 PM

Seren, love your poem, just because we didn't get choose in one doesn't me you will not in another. What I like someone else doesn't and we can not please everyone the only one you have to please is yourself. And your poem for the triple tetractys contest I like. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2016 11:59:00 PM

Oh Eve your so soul uplifting , I write for myself glsd I don't rely on it for a living. I think even dry bread and water would be above my means. Haha....Seren

Dm Babbit

Date: 7/8/2016 11:29:00 AM

Nicely played.

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2016 11:35:00 AM

Thank you for commenting....Seren

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/7/2016 9:36:00 PM

Give yourself a little credit, Seren. You are an excellent poet.

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2016 12:00:00 AM

Hi Daniel thank you...Seren