Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Biggest Mistake

my biggest mistake
you must agree
is thinking I was able 
to write poetry

i try very hard
really do my best
when it comes to the crunch
I fail the test

couplets I like to write 
trying not to make it sound too trite

haiku oh my
this really does try my brain...
like rain in summer

I will keep writing prose
practice makes perfect,  I suppose 

penned. 7 July 2016

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Joseph P. DiMino July 30, 2016 at 2:30 PM Yet all olfactory is not in the nose. Your spirit delights. Excellent write!

Eve Roper July 8, 2016 at 6:43 PM Seren, love your poem, just because we didn't get choose in one doesn't me you will not in another. What I like someone else doesn't and we can not please everyone the only one you have to please is yourself. And your poem for the triple tetractys contest I like. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve Seren Roberts July 8, 2016 at 11:59 PM Oh Eve your so soul uplifting , I write for myself glsd I don't rely on it for a living. I think even dry bread and water would be above my means. Haha....Seren

DM Babbit July 8, 2016 at 11:29 AM Nicely played. Seren Roberts July 8, 2016 at 11:35 AM Thank you for commenting....Seren

Daniel Turner July 7, 2016 at 9:36 PM Give yourself a little credit, Seren. You are an excellent poet. Seren Roberts July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM Hi Daniel thank you...Seren