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BIG TRAIN inspired by Glenn Hughes

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Movin on again, just waitin for the train. Its tracking round the bend. Left you a message with my love to send. You know I’m waitin for your answer. Need to know your feelins, darlin I depend. Need that lovin sensation you bring to me. On the train now to another destiny. Trackin away from you always makes me blue. Rattlin of this train, I wanna be closer to you. Baby you are the one I really need. Yet this big train is taking me away in speed. Darkness falls and it’s my only belief. Train taking me as if it’s a thief. Baby as I gaze out the window I have to mention. Movin away from you - you have all my attention. Trackin away from you always makes me blue. Rattling of this train, I wanna be closer to you. Phone close to my ear, I long to hear. Your sweet voice whisper to me. I wanna feel your embrace. Kiss your sweet face. I wanna be with you again I want you on this train.

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Date: 12/6/2024 3:07:00 AM
You picked a great song to write to and your poem is exquisite! I just launched a new Glenn Hughes contest, the 11th really. Please write for this one too.
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Date: 9/16/2024 6:58:00 AM
'Trackin away from you always makes me blue' congratulations dear poet.
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Date: 9/16/2024 5:45:00 AM
What a gorgeous song these lyrics/poem would make! Xo
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Date: 8/23/2024 7:43:00 PM
It's hard not to be moved SV, by this lyric appreciative poem. Blessings as always. S:) xx
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:10:00 PM
You are such a darling Sam. I saw that there was a comment, and wondered who on earth would like this one? It was you ! Thank you so much.

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