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Good evening Ladies, gentlemen Start the show For tonight A feast for your eyes to see Like nothing before Tigers, bears Your jaws to the ground More you want More you'll get So great your head might explode You'll be begging more ***By Chris Matt for Nette Onclaud's contest, “Share a Shadorma.”***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2011 9:54:00 PM
Eerie carnivals...always make me think of ghost and goblins, Chris, for some reason. Congrats on a worthy poem presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:14:00 PM
GREAT job with this one. The circus aspect is so fun. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:54:00 PM
Congrats Chris on your 4th place win with this beautiful write.
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Date: 8/23/2011 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. You left the reader with a mood of excitement. Good job! Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/23/2011 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Chris. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 9:13:00 AM
Congrats Chris on your 4th place win with this elegant entry on carnival...luv..
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Date: 8/23/2011 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Chris
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:00:00 AM
hey Chris congrats on your win, ..exploding heads.. ha ha ha .. David
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:54:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Chris! Cheers from Cyndi
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:56:00 PM
Very unique write on the carnival, Chris
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