Big Smile, Little Frown

Look God, 
It’s just one big, monstrous loop,
Viciously beating itself to death only to restart over and over again and
We, the people, are all so very sick of it.
So let’s just say we broke our own little hearts -
We’ll forget your part in the whole thing and
We can play ever so nicely and never fight again, ok?

Because 
We can no longer hug each other to the highest happiness
Nor raise the lowest from the most lowly of lows.
Maybe you can give us wonderful blank new masks so
We can forget who we are and try to get along.
Oh, and we'll be very careful what we ask,
We know we might not like the answers too much.
We never do.
So please God,

Just grow up.
Calm down.
Big smile.
Little frown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:35 PM
Hi Ian, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Welcome to soup...Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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