Big League Dreams

My doctor warned me not to fall. Should I give up on big league ball?

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 7/25/2025 9:12:00 PM

Feel it Such things happen in life .Have a nice day

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/25/2025 5:51:00 PM

Hey David, this short piece really packs a punch! It captures that tough moment of wrestling with a big dream and a hard reality in just two lines. Feels real and relatable—makes me want to know more about your story. Thanks for sharing!

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/25/2025 12:31:00 PM

Reminds me of a Phillies minor league outfield prospect who won the Paul Owens award for being the best in the farm system. The trouble was, he broke the same leg two years in a row, and was forced into early retirement. This is just two lines, but the collectively say a lot.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2025 11:22:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your write. Your 2 lines told a story... Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away..................