Big Brother Is Watching

They say "Big Brother" is watching you,
And I know that it must be true.
Someone sees and hears us all,
Whether we do good or if we fall.

That Someone is God's Son, Jesus.
Our Big Brother, He always sees us.
Everything we do, every word we say,
Jesus sees and hears everyday.

Not just our deeds, He knows our thoughts,
He knows the hidden secrets of our hearts.
Nothing is hidden from His watchful eyes.
He sees and hears each breath, each sigh.

Yes, Big Brother is watching us,
The Son of God, Christ Jesus.
But more than watch, He intercedes,
Asking the Father to meet our needs.


6/30/12 For Black Eyed Susan's "Big Brother -
who's watching you and why" contest
3rd place
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Kearley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 7:56 PM
I love this one Kim...I'm going to hav to Fav it! :o) Much Love,Dan
Rutherford Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations Kim ,your poem is indisputably a number one winner to me.Love every line. Anne
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 5:10 PM
what an awesome message this is!! Congrats on your well deserved win.
Onclaud Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 12:21 PM
kudos to you on your fine win, kim!..:) huggs!
Williams Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Kim congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Kim. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 7:53 PM
What a lovely take on the contest. I think this is a number 1 entry. congratulations. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 3:01 PM
lovely poem Kim...congrats on your win
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:35 PM
congratulations on your third place win with this awesome write! Lori
Grisetti Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations you tour poem winning.
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Congrats kim on the win!!!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 1:03 PM
congratsd Kim on an excellent write and win for big brother theme luv..intriguing words .. I am dealing with a concussion since a nasty fall last week.. sorry for delay..
Song Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 10:06 AM
People who conduct themselves in public and private with this understanding that the Lord is watching them are the salt of the earth...this is a wonderful idea for a poem. Glad u enjoyed the poem I wrote about my mother's doll room. :) Gwendolen
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 5:54 AM
Great faith based work..Enjoyed reading this morn..A testimony of your faith..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Duncan Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Awesome Kim,,,, has to be a " 7" ;} have a great 4th of july !
Pettit Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 2:19 AM
If George Orwell were alive today, he would have appreciated this write.
Dufresne Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 12:57 PM
This is an awesome inspiration for this contest Kim. It's number one in my book and I wish you the best for the contest... but no matter.. Its still number one. thanks for your comment Kim. God love you as always
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