Big As a House

Since big as a house, she wasn’t appealing
So there was no use in her concealing
Her enormous gut
Along with her butt 
That came with a basement, floor and a ceiling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 4:54 PM
I think you are an honest poet. You do not play by politically correct rules, as I see it. That being said, I see this lim as about a house. Obesity kills people, so I won’t applaud it Nor the designers who keep making clothes like tents. I want long life for all. Panagiota
Kaufman Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:16 AM
LOL cute but not politically correct these days..
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 1:22 PM
instead of singing she's a brick house... we go with BIG house. haha
Tor Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 12:25 PM
David I hope it isnt human but an actual house lol. Thanks for sharing...
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Sounds like 'Big House' is a little backed up there! lol. What's up front by her, anyway?! (O.K. No answer necessary!) Top-drawer limerick there, David. Smiles, gw
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