William Kelii Kekaula Poet Classicism

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Bids Thee a Night of Good

*Image of A Good Night by Pixabay.

Bids Thee A Night of Good

O' fairest maiden, thy vaulted domain art free,
Doth fleeth from thy bonds of horizons hold,
Cast thyself, and claim your superb crown to be,
Thy willfulness causeth favor amidst the bold,
Luminescence shewn thee that thou hast donned,
Transcend and traipse be thine eternal realm,
Behold the arrested eyes blessed beyond,
Whence cometh a melody beseech thee a psalm,
Surrendereth my soul, albeit, attune suite to calm.

2022 February 26
*1st Place*
The Night Sky
~~Anna Marie Kaianah: Judged 2022 April 30

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Sam Kauffman May 5, 2022 at 10:06 AM Aloha William! Your splendid moon sheds a light of beauty on all in its realm. So many beautiful images spreading out on a serene night of delightful wonder! Congratulations on your top win! ke Akua pu dear friend. Mahalo for this poem. William Kelii Kekaula May 7, 2022 at 3:17 AM Mahalo ia 'oe, Sam, no kou manao are admirable and are greatly appreciated my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2022 at 12:40 PM Congrats on your win. Wonderful work. William Kelii Kekaula May 1, 2022 at 2:19 PM I appreciate it, Andrea, most kind of you my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex May 1, 2022 at 6:35 AM Wow! Great work. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula May 1, 2022 at 9:20 AM Thanks, Christuraj, my true friend, Aloha~William

Anna Marie Kaianah April 30, 2022 at 11:42 PM Congratulations on your win Hilo! This was just beautiful I enjoyed reading this! Thank you for entering my contest. <3 ~Anna Kaianah William Kelii Kekaula May 1, 2022 at 9:19 AM A heartfelt thank you, Anna, 'twas a fun contest and I am glad you were pleased my friend, Aloha~William

Vijay Pandit February 26, 2022 at 5:06 AM An awesome ornate description my friend. A FAVE for me-- this beauty to behold as you so aptly call-- the luminous moon vibes so brilliantly conveyed, William. William Kelii Kekaula February 26, 2022 at 8:17 AM I am truly grateful, Vijay, overwhelmed, to say the least, thank you, my friend, Aloha~William!