Bid On My Love, Tell Me the Truth

Bid on My Love, Tell me the Truth Present me a future, look past my present Past all our problems, let our love be ever-present Bother not with the pleasant, show me what I'll resent Your love I might love, but will I hate your effervescence? ________________________________________________ 7:13 pm IST, 28th Nov, 2015
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Maheshwari Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Thanks a lot for the kind words! :)
A  Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 12:45 AM
PRATEEK, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 6:31 PM
congrats for the win, Nicely done!
Y. Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Prateek, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis
Lane Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Well done. congratulations to you!
Inman Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Prateek, all that you love now may become what irritates you later, a bit of wisdom.
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