Lin Lane Poet Couplet

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Bid On My Love - If You Dare

I will demand every piece of you offered to me and still want more
And you must promise I will be the only woman you love and adore

I will entrust to you my heart and soul, to the measure of ten fold
When I vow my love to you it will be forever ~ to have and to hold

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Skat A December 16, 2015 at 12:43 AM Lin, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT** Lin Lane December 16, 2015 at 3:32 AM Thanks, skat.

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2015 at 6:28 PM so romantic!! Congrats to you. Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 6:43 PM Thanks so very much, Andrea.

John Hamilton December 14, 2015 at 5:38 PM Very nice Lin as always. Congrats on your win. Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 5:53 PM Many thanks, John.

Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 3:42 PM very beautiful Lin many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 4:25 PM Merci beaucoup!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 14, 2015 at 10:20 AM lovely and romantic Lin.. Congrats on the win :) Love and hugs Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 4:25 PM Thank you so much.Rem

Balveen Cheema December 14, 2015 at 10:15 AM Congrats on your placement Lin! After all we don't believe in halves!! Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 4:24 PM Thanks, Balveen.

Alexis Y. December 14, 2015 at 9:53 AM Lin, congrats on your placement in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 9:58 AM Thanks a whole lot, Alexis.;)

James Inman December 14, 2015 at 9:08 AM You should always expect at least as much as you're willing to give and make it clear in the beginning, I like your straight forwardness, Lin, great write. Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 9:34 AM Thank you very much, James. Honesty is a shortcut that could prevent a lot of heartache. ;)

Eve Roper December 14, 2015 at 7:45 AM Great win, Lin! Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 8:34 AM Thank you, Eve.

Cecilia Macfarlane November 29, 2015 at 10:48 AM How can he resist this dare...it would be a win win both ways. Terrific romantic write Lin. Hugs Lin Lane November 29, 2015 at 11:22 AM Thank you very much, Cecilia. If he's scared away, I wouldn't want him..lol

Rizwana Bhurani November 28, 2015 at 8:43 PM Awesome...vry demanding....power pack.....bt if I were a boy I wld be scared...lol...gl Lin Lane November 29, 2015 at 5:47 AM lol Rizwana...but I'm giving back 10 times what I'm getting. Thanks for reading this one.

Cherl Dunn November 28, 2015 at 5:38 PM Dear Lin Lane Your safe with me girl, I'm not a bidder on your love, but I'd be honored with your friendship OMG, great poem though, women were born to be worshiped by the male sex right lol, take care my friend, cheri Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:43 PM Well that reply went in the wrong place.. sorry cherl...but you and are definitely friends..and you're right! Thank you for such nice comments. Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:42 PM Thank you so very much, Alexis.

Abdul Malik Mandani November 28, 2015 at 4:57 PM The second line of "...the only woman" is kind of tricky! If you bend the rule a little, I am okay with the rest! lol. Nicely done. Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:45 PM We're talking about intimate love... I'm a one man woman, and if I ever fall in love again he'd better be a one woman man. There's no rule bending in marriage. Glad you're ok with the rest.

Alexis Y. November 28, 2015 at 2:14 PM Lin, so beautiful and romantic. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:44 PM Thank you lots. Alexis

Sandra Haight November 28, 2015 at 10:39 AM I agree with all below, Lin. Very beautiful, romantic and sensual. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 11:47 AM Thanks, Sandra. I really am glad you like it and thanks for your well wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2015 at 8:42 AM - Very beautiful, Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 11:46 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Tim Smith November 28, 2015 at 6:32 AM Wow...how can one resist Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 6:37 AM lol you're safe, Tim. Today only I am taking no captives. Thank you very much for reading and commenting.