Balveen Cheema Poet Couplet

Bid On My Love

Bid On My Love

Give me unconditional love and I be your slave
             No harsh words till I reach my lonely grave

Give me my own breathing space to engrave my niche
             Waltzing romance in our idyllic world sequinned for the rich



Balveen Cheema
December 1, 2015
Contest: Bid On My Love
Sponsor: Tammy Reams

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Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2015 at 9:31 AM I read this late last night with a foggy brain. In reading it again it is quite beautiful and I believe you will find what you desire. Balveen Cheema December 5, 2015 at 10:13 AM Awww Richard, you're so sweet to come back! Anyway, I'm touched by your gesture and belief! Hugs, Balveen

Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2015 at 1:23 AM It is possible the highest bidder may be morally bankrupt. I hope the man with the richest heart is the successful suitor. Balveen Cheema December 5, 2015 at 3:09 AM OMG Richard! That would be an anti-climax to my hopes of winning the richest heart!

Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 2:06 PM lovely write for the contest:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema December 2, 2015 at 3:30 AM Thanks Jan! Love, Balveen