Tammy Reams Poet Couplet

Bid On My Love

Proposal of my love 'I plea'
     entice me with your song like the raging sea

     Grasp me with your warm breath of a hot flame
     safeguard me from the waves who come to claim.

     T. Reams   copyright 11/27/15

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Manmath Dalei May 3, 2016 at 7:27 AM Hi Tammy, Nice couplet. Enjoyed every line. Super 7 from me.........hugs

Roger Page February 6, 2016 at 5:10 PM Ingites ones imagination Love Roger

Funom Makama January 14, 2016 at 11:35 AM #7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant Tammy Reams January 17, 2016 at 9:08 PM Thank you so much for the strong comment! Sorry I'm late on my reply.

Julia Ward December 3, 2015 at 3:29 AM I hope it does well in the contest. Julia, :) Tammy Reams December 3, 2015 at 9:08 AM Hey Julia..I don't have this in the contest I'm the one who is sponsoring the contest. Thanks anyway for the comment.

Cherl Dunn November 27, 2015 at 8:29 PM Dear Tammy Love feeling of this poem, but how can you go wrong when you write about the calming effect of the seas, cheri Tammy Reams November 28, 2015 at 5:17 AM Thank you Cheri! My passion has always been the sea. It has so many things from calm to power. Have a great day!

Constance La France November 27, 2015 at 4:26 PM Tammy, this is a wonderful example for your contest, I hope I can write something beautiful for you Tammy Reams November 28, 2015 at 5:16 AM Thank you Broken Wing and coming from a pro as you are, I'm sure you will kill this one. Have a great day.