Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Tanka

Notes About The Poem

- Bicycle Tour -

                              whizzing through the grass

                            with sun and wind in her hair -

                                         unique vehicle

                              world's rivers are drying up

                              watermelon quenches thirst








10.07.2022
Tanka - 5-7-5-7-7
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen August 21, 2022 at 2:52 AM refreshing write enjoyed reading this.

Panagiota Romios August 20, 2022 at 1:44 PM This is sooo cool. What a fabulous tanka! Panagiota

Bill Baker August 11, 2022 at 3:55 PM Great contest entry, the picture is so inviting and the first three lines tell the story. The last two lines of your Tanka offer a problem and a solution. Both facts. I enjoyed your Tanka. Anne-Lise. Thanks for sharing, Bill

Paula Goldsmith July 29, 2022 at 10:16 AM What a cute/fun write. Now I want come cold watermelon. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Vladislav Raven July 20, 2022 at 1:14 PM Hi Anne-Lise, this is such a wonderful write, It should do well in the contest. I enjoyed reading this one. Held to your usual high standard. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Paul Callus July 17, 2022 at 1:14 AM This is a most fitting answer to Vienna's prompt theme, Anne-Lise, so is the accompanying picture! Regards & Hugs // paul

Gordon Mcconnell July 15, 2022 at 11:44 AM Nice piece of brevity Anne-Lise, hope you're doing well, blessings and hugs,Gordon

Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2022 at 5:40 AM Great imagery and thought-provoking!

Sara Kendrick July 13, 2022 at 4:48 PM Reads like a great contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. If only we could ride a watermelon bike once again. Sara

Phyllis Babcock July 13, 2022 at 12:39 PM Love this picture along with your words Anne Lise. love phyl

Anitha Jayasankar July 11, 2022 at 8:34 PM Such a lovely thoughtful write dear Anne... Best wishes in the contest... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 11, 2022 at 4:17 PM There are lovely images throughout this poetic gem, Anne-Lise. Reading it was a treat. Evelyn :)

Tom Cunningham July 11, 2022 at 3:21 PM Love your take on the contest theme Anne, and yes watermelon certainly quenches the thirst. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit July 11, 2022 at 4:19 AM Lovely take on the contest theme. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem.

Harry Horsman July 10, 2022 at 7:53 PM Oh, yes, love this, so pleased to have you back on board, Anne-Lise. stay well in that beautiful country of yours.

Sotto Poet July 10, 2022 at 2:44 PM What an excellent written poem, Anne-Line. Your great imagery shed even more charm to this writing and the picture was stunning too. Best wishes in the contest.