Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bffs - Never - Fallen

Best friends forever

               two bracelets, each with half a heart

      friendship ended when the tart stole my boyfriend

Tossed ~ one bracelet. Tossed ~ two friends who lost my respect. 



(For cousin Susan, who thought she had to steal everyone's boyfriend)

28 Words
November 30th 2015
Lin Lane
Fallen in 25-30 words contest
Host: nette onclaud

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Paul Callus December 5, 2015 at 3:02 PM They certainly lost your respect, and friendship! Maybe a blessing in disguise! Congrats on this fine win, Lin. ~ Regards // paul Lin Lane December 5, 2015 at 3:10 PM Thank you very much, Paul. Definitely was a blessing.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2015 at 9:43 PM Wonderful verse n win Lin.. big congrats! Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 11:20 PM Thanks a lot, Upma.

Skat A December 4, 2015 at 8:14 PM Lin, sweet win--- SKAT Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 11:20 PM Thanks, skat.

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2015 at 7:14 PM so glad this one made the list. BIG congrats to you. Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 7:16 PM Thank you for coming back, Andrea..you're so kind.

Rob Carmack December 4, 2015 at 7:02 PM In the long run, they did you a favor. Congrats on your win. Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Rob. They certainly did.

Nette Onclaud December 4, 2015 at 4:52 PM greeat piece, lin... good they are out of your life..sweet, fine congrats and thanks for joining my contest..huggs Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 6:35 PM Thank you, nette. Good idea for a contest...thanks for hosting.

Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 4:31 PM good riddance to both of them Lin - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 4:37 PM thanks Jan

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2015 at 6:01 PM This is great. Not what happened, but the clever way you did it, Lin. I likes it!! Lin Lane November 29, 2015 at 6:04 PM Thanks, Andrea. Nice to see you..;)

Emile Pinet November 29, 2015 at 12:13 PM This poem was cute, believable and just human enough to be easily relatable. Emile. Lin Lane November 29, 2015 at 1:22 PM Thanks, I'm sure it's happened to lots of people...but not to me. lol sounds like a teenage problem.