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Beyond Words

Can you grasp the need I have One that overtakes me each day Yet you remain just out of reach Allowing only fingertips to touch When I want to feel you pressed tightly against me in passion Teasing my being so gently Provoking ecstasy beyond words My soul cries out to yours My essence utters inarticulate sounds calling out to yours Needing, in urgent want the anticipation overpowering Leaving me shakened beyond words

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/13/2019 7:01:00 AM

Beautifully done, full of yearning passion. Love it :-) x

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/14/2019 4:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Elaine!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2019 6:24:00 PM

LOve this one, Brenda. Great emotive poetry that we can really relate to!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea!;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/24/2019 11:08:00 PM

You're beyond words, dear sissy...superb little write Bren...take a gander at my latest post...I hope you like it...bro bro :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/25/2019 8:06:00 AM

Lol I love it bro bro! I will be reading it to her starting today! Can't wait for part 2;) thank you my dear brother!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/24/2019 10:29:00 PM

This is beautifully written. You are a wonderful writer/poet... write on :) blessings to you

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/25/2019 8:05:00 AM

Regina you are an amazing poet thank you so much!;)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/24/2019 8:27:00 PM

My dear sissy, your poem expresses such longing, yearning and passion with such exquisite aching beauty. I can feel the heat and intensity in every line of this amazing piece filled with deepest desires. The Unicorns are shaken beyond words.. lol! ;) Love and hugs, my dear crazy sis <3

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/25/2019 8:05:00 AM

Thank you sissy so much!;) bro bro has written a story for puff puff and it's amazing!;)

James Long

Date: 9/24/2019 3:27:00 PM

Wow! You are so very passionate about life, about love, I love your faith! Glorious writing, friend!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 3:46:00 PM

Thank you James you are too kind!;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/24/2019 3:26:00 PM

Wow, talk about longing, I think you took the trophy with this one. Deeply longing and filled with desire. Love the title too.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 3:46:00 PM

Lol I think we could argue about that chris haha! But that kind you!;)