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Ink's Heat of the Heartbeat Contest ~ 6/16/26

Beyond the Stars in Ebony Skies

I felt the flow of Summer's balmy breeze
as it wafted in whispers like sweet melodies
  We walked on golden sands at twilight,
    holding hands as day drifted into dusk.

I was savoring memories of
cherished moments we share.
  Tonight, resplendent roseate skies 
    fill my eyes with their color,
     but a bit of melancholy crept in
       and unconsciously my steps slowed.
He felt my hesitation and in concern,
he held me close in his arms and said,
   "What is that makes you so sad? 
        I can see it in the mists of your eyes."

Tears flowed as I fought to explain
the pain I'd feel in my heart if we drifted apart.
I stammered the words but got them out,
   "We fell in love and vowed it would be for life
      but even mountains of stone can break.
       How would I live with that heartache?"

He rested his chin on top of my head
and held me tighter to stop my trembling.
Then, he said the most beautiful sentiments
   I'd ever heard...

"Whether in this life or another,
   no matter the realm we might be,
    I promise I will find you beyond the stars,
     searching every corner of ebony skies.
On moonlight's path I would swiftly sail 
   beseeching her to guide my way to you.
You will never be beyond my reach,
  for only your kisses sate my hunger...
    and only your love quenches my thirst."

He turned me to face the fading sun
  as it slowly sank into the skyline.
Pointed his finger in that direction
   and whispered near my ear...

"Do you see far out on the horizon,
   where the sky drifts into the sea?"
If ever we're torn apart, look for me there.
I'll be a ripple on the water
  or a glimmer of stardust in the sky,
   searching for you until we're together again.
Have no fear of love's lament, for
   our love was meant to last forever."

The moon's reflection shimmered on the sea
  as he brushed his lips across mine in a fashion
    that made passion's heat rise in my heart.
Each beat crashing as a wave upon the shore...
Beneath flickering stars, we stood side by side
  swaying with the ebb and flow of evening tide.
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Kitchin Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 2:28 PM
Lin, this is so beautiful, heartfelt and romantic. True love so well expressed in your lines that are both passionate and poignant. Congratulations on your first place win.
Lane Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 11:40 AM
Thank you, Tania.
Empress Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 7:52 AM
Dear Linnersz, The passion in my heart too did rise as I read the ending of this very touching poem woven in such a romantic manner! The flow, the way youv painted imagery and expressed through and through left me in awe feeling so much, i especially love the lines “ for only your kisses sate my hunger... and only your love quenches my thirst.” I definitely know that feeling! Pleasure reading this soulful poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations on your win! Sending u light
Lane Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 9:19 AM
Thanks ever so much for your kindhearted remarks, Ink. Each one brings a smile to me and is heartwarming. Ever and always supportive of my poetry, you are a valued friend.
One Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 3:04 PM
You always did write a great love poem, I know you romantic nature so well... I have to say your poetry has developed to a very high standard over the years... You do brevity really well and your words are so easy to follow, you create vivid imagery and your word pairings and limited use of metaphors and alliterations give you your own unique poetic style.. I see you got a bit sensual towards the end also.. I am sure this one will be top of the list in this contest... Peace and Blessings..
Lane Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:43 AM
What gracious comments from you and I thank you very much. You probably know better than anyone the journey my poetry has taken. A bit of sensual was befitting their romance… I thought. I’ve sent you soup mail.
Gibbons Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 5:43 AM
Wow truly awesome I felt deep love of adoration in your words flowing from the depth of your very passionate heart Lin gotto be another fav for me. Keep writing from your heart and soul. <3
Lane Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:40 AM
Thank you for your generous remarks and faving, Dorothy. They’re appreciated.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 9:40 PM
I agree with Tom, you are the queen of passion. Love this romantic poem you wrote… Beryl
Lane Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:39 AM
Thanks so very much for your kind thoughts, Beryl.
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 10:14 AM
You are the queen of romance Lin, the thought of losing something she craved for was too much to bear but his reasuring words brought her comfort. I'm reading a winner here. Tom
Lane Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 11:08 AM
I’m always grateful for your thoughts on my poetry, Tom. The past serves to express the frailty of the heart and the grief felt in such situations. Thank you very much.
Rodgers Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:45 AM
Dear Lin, what a luminous love poem that feels both earthly and celestial at once. I love how you let the tenderness rise slowly, like dusk settling over the water, until those vows spill out with the kind of devotion people spend lifetimes hoping to hear. Lin, your imagery is gorgeous, but it’s the emotional truth beneath it that stays with me. Beautiful work, my friend. Blessings, Daniel
Lane Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 7:51 AM
Thank you ever so sincerely, Daniel for feeling the emotions behind my words. You didn't miss the overture of dusk settling into the darkness of her fears and the dispelling of them through his tenderness. I am so pleased that you captured my thoughts with your own.
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