Beyond the Pale

A guard overseeing the king’s jail
Mocked the inmates without fail.
He spoke to them rudely
And treated them crudely.
Now the king has his head in a pail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Shaw Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Great limerick, Paul. Very classic and funny. Love it. Hugs, Kimberly
Schneiter Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Thank you, Kimberly. I sincerely appreciate your kind words of encouragement.
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 6:50 PM
oh dear! lol Hugs Jan xx
Schneiter Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Thanks for commenting, Jan. I need to spend more time on quality and less time on quantity.
Cervenka Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 6:27 PM
What a very wise and kind King you have. I love limericks, thanks for sharing yours. =)
Schneiter Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Janet for your kind and thoughtful reply. Please know of my appreciation.
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