Beyond the Mist

there beyond the mist a distant faraway place life softly echoes

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Daniel Turner

Date: 5/19/2023 6:10:00 AM

Come on down! We'll have a barbecue. There'll be music, you can dance, laugh and carry on. You do remember how to do all that stuff, right? I might even chunk you in the lake! However I doubt your echoes would be soft:) Probably a few screams of laughter! You better start having some fun or Im going to have to make a trip up there! Friend! LOL

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/23/2023 6:20:00 AM

I can laugh, dance, carry on, and I know how to have FUN! You have no idea. LOL! The lake, the ocean, wherever, one of us will get wet! : )

Andrew John

Date: 5/19/2023 4:27:00 AM

Always good to see how well people treat subjects with so few words, using such a piece as a haiku. So thank you. The same size of poem is a senryu, which is what I have used (more than a dozen of them here!). Thank you, Sandra.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/23/2023 6:29:00 AM

Such a special comment, thank you, Andrew. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 5/18/2023 10:47:00 PM

A good poem. Well done.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 5/23/2023 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Jeanette for your kind comment.