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Beyond the Blue Sky

Beyond the blue sky
                                          There's a Heaven we believe
                                               sweet home is like too

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2012

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Richard Palmer Date: 8/27/2012 11:11:00 AM nice write BL,we believe,check out my views in my poem Heaven Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/26/2012 8:14:00 PM Very nice, BL! Sweet comparison to heaven. Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 8/27/2012 1:16:00 AM You are too. Thanks for sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/26/2012 2:23:00 PM step #1 Dev no need for capitalization in haiku [it's Ok for proper names though] Light & Love Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 8/27/2012 1:14:00 AM Many thanks for your comment with suggestion. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2012 2:05:00 PM Sounds nice out beyond the blue skies - well written - oxox hugs Anne-Lise ;) Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 8/27/2012 1:13:00 AM Lovely friend, Thank you for nice comment. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/26/2012 1:34:00 PM Great thoughts penned...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 8/27/2012 1:12:00 AM Thanks my sweet friend for early comment. Loved always, bl