Beyond Tears

Spin gently, my dear peachy one Mother’s here as clouds fall asleep Let eyelids drop in folds quite deep Tuck your worries; peace has begun. When life’s unkind, the night beguiles Inside your heart glows a blest dream; Stardust blowing new hope, agleam Everything’s right, bring out that smile. The moon bestows the guiding light Beyond a fog collecting tears, Love’s comfort never disappears To will those wings strong and upright. The air drones a lullaby chime While heaven flings its sweet bouquet; And morning chirps a tuneful play Till flowers wake day’s fresh sunshine! To Heal A Heart Contest Sponsor: FJ Thomas

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Date: 3/27/2014 5:00:00 PM
Smooth, silky smooth.
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:42:00 PM
great nette... Congrats
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Date: 3/13/2014 1:00:00 AM
A perfect fragrance of spring Nette ! Congrats on worthy win !
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Date: 3/11/2014 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/11/2014 12:05:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations, with your big win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:02:00 AM
Congrats on your deserved win Nette!!
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderful thoughts to heal a heart, nette
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Date: 3/11/2014 9:07:00 AM
- Theme - "TO HEAL A HEART" contest: Congratulations on your touching and excellent winning poem, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2014 8:15:00 AM
This is a poem dedicated to any childhood heart that is hurt. Congrats for your well-deserved win! :-)
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Date: 3/11/2014 7:41:00 AM
a very beautiful poem.. as always! ..Congrats on your win!!! ^__^
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Date: 3/3/2014 7:56:00 AM
Like sweet flowing waters your poem is soothing to my soul. Excellent work here.
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Date: 3/1/2014 10:31:00 AM
Extreme beauty of beyond tears it's, my lovely friend. You find words in genius ways to depict the same theme in the same ways. Lovely done my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:36:00 PM
Beautiful poem. There is nothing like a mother's love. Thanks for sharing....Lucilla
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Date: 2/28/2014 7:40:00 PM
And so, the mother comforts her blessing...right to sleep ! *smiles* Beautiful write dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend....much love, james
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Date: 2/28/2014 1:28:00 PM
I can take your brilliance to bank Nette,each day with fantastic release,this is another jaw-dropping prowess,kudos my friend.
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Date: 2/28/2014 10:59:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:24:00 AM
SO Loved this Nette-- what a peaceful and beautiful piece of writing... " the air drones a lullaby chime"--- awesome choice of words. Xxxx
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Date: 2/28/2014 6:56:00 AM
Such a gentle tender lullabye. Every child should be sent to dreamland like this.
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Date: 2/28/2014 5:32:00 AM
Soothing like a river running slow! Nette your love pours throughout! 7 hugs, chuck
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Date: 2/28/2014 12:43:00 AM
Sigh...elegant, through the sadness. A visceral need to overcome it all and just embrace solace. Stunning lines.
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Date: 2/28/2014 12:26:00 AM
Reftreshing,warm,soft and beautifully scenting the air..Awesome "!!
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Date: 2/27/2014 9:47:00 PM
Wow, this is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I really enjoyed reading the following lines, "The moon bestows the guiding light/Beyond a fog collecting tears," those lines has been done masterfully! My two muses are within these lines...the fog and the major one, the moon! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a grandiose piece! Excellent Work!!
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Date: 2/27/2014 8:14:00 PM
Dear Nette: Lullaby in sweet sighs! and my oh my... Lovely. Leon
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Date: 2/27/2014 3:09:00 PM
Mmmmmmmmm, how dreamy. Oh, I needed this today. We were stuck in a snow squall! Driving to Stratford for groceries.. we ended up in at a greasy spoon and then just headed back. Rather harrowing! Couldn't see two feet in front of the car! This poem soothed me.. I especially liked morning chirps! Yes, it can! LOL! I've heard it! I liked this so much into my faves it goes... this spoke personally to me. Hope all is well, Doll ;)
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Date: 2/27/2014 2:26:00 PM
beautiful write, Nette
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