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Beyond Reach

Beyond Reach. We’re all majestic bubbles, inside a mystery galaxy bubble. Floating through space like NASA's, telescope Hubble. Searching for the answers, held by after life’s ransom. Beyond the bright stars, we peek. Where all souls must reach to keep. What seems so far is close, but out of reach for most. Of those who don’t believe, beyond the reach, they seek.

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 10/10/2024 4:53:00 AM

Searching for answers, we must reach beyond. Beautifully written piece, James.

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Frani! Your words mean everything! Have a blessed day!

Andrew John

Date: 10/10/2024 3:03:00 AM

Reaching beyond what we seek can be an interesting exercise. Nice one, James. It's been nice to peek at this poem!

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for peeking and your comment, Andrew! I look forward to reviewing your writings and many others on poetry soup again thank you!

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 10/9/2024 3:07:00 PM

Inspired // blessings in His Almighty Light

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:20:00 PM

Yes indeed Nyaga! Thank you!

Kayla Herriford

Date: 10/9/2024 2:24:00 PM

Very flowing and soulful poem

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:22:00 PM

Thank you again Kayla for your wonderful comments!

Eyon Nobody

Date: 10/9/2024 1:59:00 PM

That was an interesting and wonderful poem

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:25:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment, Stein!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/9/2024 12:02:00 PM

Great narrative poem. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. Excellent intermittent rhyning sequence. Blessings always!

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:29:00 PM

Joseph! Thank you so much for your comments. You words means so much to me as I build on my writing insecurities. Bless you too!

Yolanda Joy Nicholsen

Date: 8/22/2024 5:23:00 PM

This is an awesome write beyond reach is a captivating metaphor enjoyed reading your work many blessings.

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Yolanda! Your words means everything. I look forward to reading yours and many others writings in poetry soup.

Lucas Smith

Date: 7/7/2024 12:43:00 PM

I enjoyed this. It reminded me of the feeling of being so close to something you want but still it's out of reach. Space is the same paradox. I dunno... Anyway!

James Chapman
Date: 10/16/2024 2:40:00 PM

Exactly Lucas! And thank you for your comment. I look forward to reviewing some of your work. Have a blessed day!