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Beyond Midnight

Originally for Andrea’s One in Three contest but checked the rules before posting and found I’d written over 16 lines DOH!!! I’ll keep the title and thank you Andrea for the inspiration. Beyond Midnight Long before midnight, she was due in Mama said, not to be late There she was with her arms around him Down by our old front gate The frost was hard, as was the news He whispered in her ear She heard and yet, had to refuse The cold words she did fear The moon was high with halo haze The stars all watching eyes Looking down on their liaise Mournful of her cries Still her arms held tight around Unwilling to release Firmly there she held him bound Despite his freedom pleas Descending low with icy claws The frost began to bite Mama’s words she now ignores Be in before midnight The witching hour will soon be here Her chance to captivate Renew his love and keep him near It may not be to late Once more her tiny voice a plead Be mine forever more But nothing reached beyond his need His pardon did implore In earthly silence there they stood The time it would not stay The hearts that once had beat their blood Were fading fast to clay As the morn arose through mists There covered by the hoar Embracing in their final kiss For love, that would not thaw.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/20/2018 11:26:00 PM
aha!! I had seen this one before too!! I see it had been a "mistake" for my contest that ended up being a GREAT poem anyway.So nice seeing it again.
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Date: 1/19/2017 9:38:00 PM
Richard, I never know what poem to comment on since I think I have seen them all, so I went to your" las"t BEST poem on the list and found out it had been done for MY contest (though you went over on the lines) I had seen this back in 2013. CAn you imagine all this time gone by?? So glad this was a popular poem for you!
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Date: 8/11/2013 4:18:00 PM
by the way, Star Wars Rules. he he he! I got stuck with the star trek. all due to a stupid coin toss. hugs
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/13/2013 6:02:00 PM
Come now B'lana, you know you'reloving it lol
Date: 8/11/2013 4:14:00 PM
you see my sister and I chose bots cuz robots are cool. Lolz but you are right. I will change my avatar and break pd's heart just for you...... he he he he! kidding. She won't mind. she's curious on whom I will choose. Are you A Trek fan. I hope to see one from you. if not it's cool. thanxs for being curious. Skat
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/13/2013 5:59:00 PM
I'm thinking about it
Date: 8/4/2013 12:49:00 AM
this is very eerie, my friend!! Love that final stanza!! I'm glad I guessed correctly that this was the one not for my contest.when I saw it below another one with one of my contest titles and decided to take a chance and see it. So gosh, how did this couple end up frozen right in front of a gate? A very original and hauntingly beautiful poem, Richard!!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/5/2013 8:10:00 AM
You mean woman's curiosity got the better of you Petal lol, I know you know haha, Thanks for the inspiration again.
Date: 8/2/2013 3:48:00 PM
By the sweet by... lovely poem. It's just after midnight here. Am I too late?
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Date: 8/2/2013 5:07:00 PM
Hello Gerald, It depends where you are and what your intentions are, if it's to save this hapless couple then I fear you're too late. I thank you for your concern and this very sweet comment. Will look you up.
Date: 8/2/2013 3:01:00 PM
Auntie forgives you for being silent so long when you come up with such an amazing piece of absolute beauty.....
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/2/2013 5:02:00 PM
HAH, Silent for so long, it's been less than 24 hrs and you manage to make it sound like it's forever lol. Anyway Richard accepts Aunties forgiveness and thanks you for this wonderful comment :)
Date: 8/2/2013 2:33:00 PM
I very much enjoyed reading this poem on this lonley afternoon. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/2/2013 4:50:00 PM
I hope this brightened your afternoon Lucy along with all the other writes you've read, Let me know how you're doing, are you back driving yet?
Date: 8/2/2013 2:27:00 PM
What a tender write, my friend. Wow to your creativity. You've got the gift of the rhyme. Rhyme on, bruv. By the by, I owe you a pretty thank you. Muuuchly appreciated, Richard. Licia :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/2/2013 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Sis, One tries ones best haha, Rhymne on, yes, sounds like a title me. Always appreciate your comments Licia :)
Date: 8/2/2013 7:22:00 AM
Forgot to give you a well deserved 7
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/2/2013 2:22:00 PM
I do this sometimes, then I can't remember whether I did or not so go back an give another anyway lol
Date: 8/2/2013 7:21:00 AM
Now this is nothing short of amazing, straight to my favorites, dam your good!
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Date: 8/2/2013 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for this comment Rick, and for all the encouragement you have given over my time here. Is always an immense honour to receive a comment like this.
Date: 8/1/2013 10:19:00 PM
hello Richard, epic imagery, a contradiction brought on by the night. Love it! :-) sad to see such imagery and love fade away.... always a fan... xox-Linda
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Date: 8/2/2013 2:13:00 PM
Hello my Sweet Dark Friend, Life is full of contradictions but we are always learning from them. Hope you're keeping well. Thank you for your visit and comment, time you had a new one up, I keep looking.

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