Donna Jones Poet Verse

Beyond All Walls

Beyond all walls
Midnight sky calls
Wishing star falls
Where dreams come true

Rain on rooftop
Morning dewdrop
Cloudy days stop
Bring skies of blue

Donna Jones
12-7-2014
Contest:Desiderata
Theme: Remember what peace there may be in silence

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FJ Thomas April 4, 2018 at 11:46 AM Well this was a wonderful response to that contest theme! Wonderful Donna :)

Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 10:42 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2015 at 3:22 PM Congrats on your winning work..I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for stopping by. Sara Donna Jones February 18, 2015 at 10:04 AM Thank you very much Sarah.....don't have much time these days...hope all is well with you and your family...can't find these contest results anywhere...would like to congradulate all winners but can't find under member contest winners..where did you find it?

Poet Destroyer A December 26, 2014 at 9:09 PM DONNA, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~ Donna Jones February 18, 2015 at 10:01 AM Thanks much Linda...was fun....can you please tell me where to find contest results...I like to congrulate winners but can't find listed under winners under member contests...

Richard Lamoureux December 21, 2014 at 9:20 AM I can see why this one was chosen. Congratulations Donna, also a Christmas Hug!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2014 at 7:13 AM - Dear Donna, I will bring you beautiful wishes for Christmas - I hope you will get a lovely time with your family and friends - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans December 16, 2014 at 9:48 AM This is such a beautiful peaceful poem. Congratulations on your win Donna.

Nette Onclaud December 16, 2014 at 5:38 AM I find much joy in this flowing write, donns.. you made me smile!..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!

Paul Callus December 15, 2014 at 5:57 AM Very enjoyable take on this theme that you chose, Donna. Lovely imagery, rhyme and flow. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Vera Duggan December 15, 2014 at 12:24 AM Donna my dear friend, congrat's. on your win, well worth it, great poem, take care ,.................Vera............

Sandra Haight December 14, 2014 at 6:30 PM Hi Donna, congratulations to you on your fine win in this contest. Very beautiful with excellent imagery through your words. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2014 at 10:56 AM a beautiful way of wishing. congrats for your win with this sweet poem.

Jan Allison December 14, 2014 at 9:36 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta December 14, 2014 at 4:33 AM Beautiful images and nice a flow, congratulations on the win, Donna

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 14, 2014 at 2:23 AM Awesome write Donna! Congrats on big win!

Kayod5 Kayode December 14, 2014 at 1:11 AM Dropping back to congratulate you Donna, I am happy this made it to the top...huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 9, 2014 at 12:43 AM Lovely Donna "Beyond all walls Midnight sky calls"---Love XXXX rajat

Monterey Sirak December 8, 2014 at 7:19 AM Beautiful! Love the images! Rain on rooftops is such a peaceful sound.

Germaine Thompson December 7, 2014 at 10:52 PM Hi Donna nice piece

Barbara Gorelick December 7, 2014 at 5:45 PM So very nice..This will do well. BG Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:22 PM Thanks Barbara...just nice to be back participating..

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2014 at 11:55 AM oh, I just love yours . it is so filled with imagery. You chose a good quote there for it. Good to see you. it's a rare treat. Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:20 PM Means a lot Andrea...thanks..

Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2014 at 10:56 AM - Small... but so beautiful, dear Donna! - I wish you luck in the contest - Have a great Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:20 PM Thank you so much..hope yours was lovely as well.

Tim Smith December 7, 2014 at 10:44 AM Fabulous Donna...dreams coming true and skies of blue...lovely....hugs Tim Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:14 PM Aahh..thank you kind young man...

Kayod5 Kayode December 7, 2014 at 10:35 AM This is very magnificent Donna,no doubt Nette will like this ; goodluck in the contest...huggs Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:13 PM Very kind..:-) :-) my very first attempt at this form..never even heard of it..I'm not very well....good I guess is the word when it comes to forms...so really..thanks...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Jan Allison December 7, 2014 at 10:12 AM so beautifully penned with lovely imagery Donna. I think this will do well- good luck:-) Hugs jan xx Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:10 PM Thank you very much Jan....