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Beyond All Walls

Beyond all walls Midnight sky calls Wishing star falls Where dreams come true Rain on rooftop Morning dewdrop Cloudy days stop Bring skies of blue Donna Jones 12-7-2014 Contest:Desiderata Theme: Remember what peace there may be in silence

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FJ Thomas

Date: 4/4/2018 11:46:00 AM

Well this was a wonderful response to that contest theme! Wonderful Donna :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:42:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2015 3:22:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 2/18/2015 10:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Sarah.....don't have much time these days...hope all is well with you and your family...can't find these contest results anywhere...would like to congradulate all winners but can't find under member contest winners..where did you find it?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 9:09:00 PM

DONNA, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~

Donna Jones
Date: 2/18/2015 10:01:00 AM

Thanks much Linda...was fun....can you please tell me where to find contest results...I like to congrulate winners but can't find listed under winners under member contests...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/21/2014 9:20:00 AM

I can see why this one was chosen. Congratulations Donna, also a Christmas Hug!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2014 7:13:00 AM

- Dear Donna, I will bring you beautiful wishes for Christmas - I hope you will get a lovely time with your family and friends - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/16/2014 9:48:00 AM

This is such a beautiful peaceful poem. Congratulations on your win Donna.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/16/2014 5:38:00 AM

I find much joy in this flowing write, donns.. you made me smile!..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/15/2014 5:57:00 AM

Very enjoyable take on this theme that you chose, Donna. Lovely imagery, rhyme and flow. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/15/2014 12:24:00 AM

Donna my dear friend, congrat's. on your win, well worth it, great poem, take care ,.................Vera............

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/14/2014 6:30:00 PM

Hi Donna, congratulations to you on your fine win in this contest. Very beautiful with excellent imagery through your words. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 10:56:00 AM

a beautiful way of wishing. congrats for your win with this sweet poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2014 9:36:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2014 4:33:00 AM

Beautiful images and nice a flow, congratulations on the win, Donna

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/14/2014 2:23:00 AM

Awesome write Donna! Congrats on big win!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/14/2014 1:11:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you Donna, I am happy this made it to the top...huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/9/2014 12:43:00 AM

Lovely Donna "Beyond all walls Midnight sky calls"---Love XXXX rajat

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/8/2014 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful! Love the images! Rain on rooftops is such a peaceful sound.

Germaine Thompson

Date: 12/7/2014 10:52:00 PM

Hi Donna nice piece

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/7/2014 5:45:00 PM

So very nice..This will do well. BG

Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 10:22:00 PM

Thanks Barbara...just nice to be back participating..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2014 11:55:00 AM

oh, I just love yours . it is so filled with imagery. You chose a good quote there for it. Good to see you. it's a rare treat.

Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 10:20:00 PM

Means a lot Andrea...thanks..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 10:56:00 AM

- Small... but so beautiful, dear Donna! - I wish you luck in the contest - Have a great Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 10:20:00 PM

Thank you so much..hope yours was lovely as well.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/7/2014 10:44:00 AM

Fabulous Donna...dreams coming true and skies of blue...lovely....hugs Tim

Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 10:14:00 PM

Aahh..thank you kind young man...

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/7/2014 10:35:00 AM

This is very magnificent Donna,no doubt Nette will like this ; goodluck in the contest...huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 10:13:00 PM

Very kind..:-) :-) my very first attempt at this form..never even heard of it..I'm not very well....good I guess is the word when it comes to forms...so really..thanks...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2014 10:12:00 AM

so beautifully penned with lovely imagery Donna. I think this will do well- good luck:-) Hugs jan xx

Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 10:10:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan....