Beyond

beyond walls the sky and beyond the sky, moon, stars — heaven’s pearly gates 1/6/2019

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Date: 1/13/2019 8:44:00 AM

Dear Kim - you wrote this beautiful haiku the day my father passed away and I found it today. It is giving our family great comfort. I am so happy to have found your beautiful words. - TS

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2019 3:00:00 PM

Happiest that my poem could provide comfort. <3

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/6/2019 4:02:00 PM

Best haiku ever Kim. Best one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2019 5:45:00 PM

Thank you, Caren!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/6/2019 12:45:00 PM

Lovely hakiu Kim, one day all will be revealed. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2019 3:34:00 PM

Thanks, Tom!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2019 9:24:00 AM

In that third heaven where resides our Savior and Lord must be the most glorious scene so much so it is indescribable for man. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!