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Bewitching Night

Lover 1

bewitching  night
screech owls mock our sighs
toiled forest path 



Lover 2

lonely moonless sky
thousand strokes of raven hair
silk sheets undisturbed
jasmine scented candles burn 
mother of pearl glistening



Love Talks 
Contest Judged:  3/12/2011 	 

Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi 
      
                                 placed 7th

girlfriend-boyfriendverse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 14, 2011 at 5:54 AM

Congratulations on your win Edwin in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

March 14, 2011 at 5:09 AM

Edwin, congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest :)

Tahera Mannan

March 13, 2011 at 8:56 PM

beautiful,Warm congrats..

Stephen Parker

March 13, 2011 at 7:43 PM

Beautiful, scintillating images! I thought that this was ,by far, the best entry. Your lovers beckon with mysterious, natural portents. A great synthesis of fate and favor. This is the best poem that I have read in a while!

John Freeman

March 13, 2011 at 1:01 PM

Beautiful job, Edwin, it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in seventhplace honorable win, Agaape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

March 13, 2011 at 12:34 PM

Congrats on your fine win with this great piece. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 13, 2011 at 11:44 AM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Debbie, Edwin

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 12, 2011 at 7:28 PM

Congrats Edwin on your super win in Love Talk contest my friend with this awesome dialogue between the lovers luv.. enjoy another top ten win ...my friend....

Carolyn Devonshire

March 12, 2011 at 4:13 PM

Two very sharp contrasts in the perception of night, Edwin. Excellent duo here and congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

March 12, 2011 at 4:03 PM

Very nice Edwin. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

March 12, 2011 at 3:52 PM

This one is beautiful, Edwin. I'm glad I am finally getting to see this. A big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

March 6, 2011 at 8:13 AM

Remember as long as you are under 17 in the haiku & under 31 in the tanka I don't care, haiku speaks in phrases because the intent is for the mesage to be very open ended someone might write a haiku to preceed YOUR group or a tank OR the might jump in and write a haiku AFTER your tanka, SO, no sentences, phrases, you are definetly on the right track! And lovely to FEEL an emotional CONTENT!![no need for is the, line 1] Thanks so much you are giving me hope! Light & Love

Bewitching Night

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