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My nights have lately become sultry as suffocating heat chases sleep away, I lay wide awake unloved and sweating beneath the murmurous ceiling fan hoping for some refreshing relief. Each eventide I hear her bittersweet song drifting from the verdant vale like seductive perfume on the breeze. I cannot resist for long. I must visit every night. People say there's magic in her. Rancorous rumors have it that she seduces with a whimsical smile, subdues with an enchanting laugh, soothes with a surrealistic sigh. Maybe they're right. I know they’re right. For I am under her arcane spell. Late at night I leave my rumpled bed and like a somnambulist I tread through mysterious corridors of my house. The dazzling moon shines the pathways that lead down the surreal vale into the sonorous cavern where she concocts her alluring recondite runes. There I hope to get a glimpse of her Embrace her gorgeous beauty for untold time Till inexplicably I find myself alone back on my bed. Can you blame me if I’m under her spell? 8 January 2021

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Date: 1/10/2021 2:13:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Victor. Your story of her is indeed magical. Hope you have a great week :)
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Date: 1/10/2021 2:55:00 AM
Guess not Victor, she is quite something, maybe you still will find her, dream harder and longer she might just come and refresh you one night. Great poetry, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
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Date: 1/9/2021 5:31:00 AM
Hi Victor, That was some dream. I found it alluring and enchanting. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/8/2021 10:12:00 PM
Dreams, can feel so real when sound asleep. Some dreams you would love to stay forever. Lovely poem, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/8/2021 9:45:00 PM
An amazing dream my friend. I followed every word.
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Date: 1/8/2021 7:38:00 PM
A bewitchingly beautiful romantic fantasy, with just the right touch of mystery. :=)
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Date: 1/8/2021 4:35:00 PM
this is quite a fantasy poem, Victor. And back in bed you landed in the end!!
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Date: 1/8/2021 3:52:00 PM
No one could blame you being under the spell of one so beautiful with the voice of an Angel, if only seen in dreams. A lovely charmed write Victor ~~ Belle
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Date: 1/8/2021 3:45:00 PM
I love to walk at ight with my dogs. The beautiful starlit sky lighting my way.The melodious call of night birds making music in the night. It's a magical, calming time when no one else is around. Wonderful job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/8/2021 10:43:00 AM
Very captivating and enchanting, is there a part two? Well done! :)
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Date: 1/8/2021 7:07:00 AM
Sounds captivating! One’s mind drifting in the sultry dark.
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Date: 1/8/2021 6:05:00 AM
Romantic tale, magically articulated, Victor. Nice to be under the spell --the kind you describe. Your imagination shines, as always.
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Date: 1/8/2021 4:30:00 AM
She has you well and truly under her spell Victor, there is no escape. Tom
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Date: 1/8/2021 3:13:00 AM
Beautiful - a vision to enchant and enlighten the soul, like music breathing out a tune, this poem penetrates the very pores. breathtaking... God bless you
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Date: 1/8/2021 2:48:00 AM
- There is magic in all your dreams and poems, Victor ... beautifully written :) - Have a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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