Carrie Richards Poet Tritina

Bewitched

Along a moonlight path, where lovers kiss
Beware the spell that charms a fool
For the midnight hour can blind the eye

A capricious dark will twinkle eyes
A trick to tempt crossed lover's kiss 
Bewitching every star-struck fool

If you choose to be the fool
Beguiled by moon, who winks an eye
Be wary of the moonlight kiss

A kiss will fool a blind man's eye, when stars conspire with the moon



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Inspired by Andrea's Contest: Tritina

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Audrey Haick March 16, 2013 at 4:23 PM Congratulations on an awesome win, Carrie! Enjoy your weekend! Love, Annalise

Michael Dom March 14, 2013 at 4:07 AM I like it! I've not yet tried tritina, but you've inspired me. Cheers!

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2013 at 10:17 AM Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2013 at 9:30 PM CARRIE, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

Ray Dillard March 10, 2013 at 11:58 AM So,,You've finally figured out the moon and stars are in cahoots, eh! That 'fella of yours has been plotting with them for years now! Continued LUCK with LIFE! RAY

Bukang Liwayway March 10, 2013 at 10:49 AM an awesome write my friend Carrie, I like it. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 10, 2013 at 7:57 AM Congrats on your win Carrie xx

David Williams March 10, 2013 at 7:26 AM Carrie congrats on your win, don't trust the moon eh..I like ...David

Connie Gildersleeve March 10, 2013 at 6:39 AM Carrie beautifully written. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 4:36 AM CongratulatIons Carrie on your win!I loved it On my first read.

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2013 at 11:55 PM This was wonderful. I almost put it higher!!! Maybe I should have. Except I was trying to do three placements per number. Congrats on your win, Carrie!

Kash Poet March 1, 2013 at 9:03 AM Wonderful!!Love your Tritina.

Audrey Haick February 22, 2013 at 7:51 PM Classic, that's what this is, Carrie! I'm so loving this! A definite one for the Winners' List! Love, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2013 at 2:07 PM - Carrie, a unique poem that is perfect for contest ..... a little gem .... it will be a winning poem - Have a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)