Roy Pett Poet Limerick

Beware When Walking On Snow

Jack slipped on ice under some deep snow
on his behind down the hill did go
as he slid, hit a bump
bruising his quite large rump,
beware of frost Jack and all below.

2/22/2018
Contest: as I was walking in the snow
Sponsored by Kevin Shaw.

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FJ Thomas March 6, 2018 at 3:42 PM Lol good one Roy! Roy Pett March 6, 2018 at 5:07 PM Thanks Shadow for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked my limerick. :))

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2018 at 3:19 PM a cute limerick, Roy. Good luck in this fun contest. Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 3:39 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Andrea really appreciated. :))

Silent One February 22, 2018 at 2:17 PM This is a good one Roy.. Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 2:31 PM Thank you so much Silent One your too kind, your support and encouragement is really appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley February 22, 2018 at 12:56 PM Oh, poor Jack bruised more than his ego, Roy :) A smartly written and humorous limerick that's delightfully amusing. Loved it! Best wishes for a win, my friend. ~Susan Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 1:57 PM Thanks Susan, I really appreciate your very kind comment and best wishes, getting these wonderful comments have really brightened up my day, thanks again for your support. :))

Tom Cunningham February 22, 2018 at 12:20 PM Great limerick Roy, good luck in the contest. Kevin has got a hard task ahead that's for see sure. Tom Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 1:52 PM Thanks Tom, never know what Kevin is looking for, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2018 at 12:06 PM - Poor Jack ... dangerous snow and ice :) - Well done, Roy - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 12:11 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, really appreciated. :))

Probir Gupta February 22, 2018 at 10:37 AM A lovely Limerick ... Good luck with the contest ... Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 10:47 AM Thank you very much for your very kind comment Probir, really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Heidi Sands February 22, 2018 at 10:29 AM Great one Roy. Good luck in the contest :) Roy Pett February 22, 2018 at 10:45 AM Thank you so much Heidi for your best wishes, much appreciated. :))