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Beware When Walking On Snow

Jack slipped on ice under some deep snow on his behind down the hill did go as he slid, hit a bump bruising his quite large rump, beware of frost Jack and all below. 2/22/2018 Contest: as I was walking in the snow Sponsored by Kevin Shaw.

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Fj Thomas

Date: 3/6/2018 3:42:00 PM

Lol good one Roy!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:07:00 PM

Thanks Shadow for your very kind comment, so pleased you liked my limerick. :))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2018 3:19:00 PM

a cute limerick, Roy. Good luck in this fun contest.

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 3:39:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Andrea really appreciated. :))

Silent One

Date: 2/22/2018 2:17:00 PM

This is a good one Roy..

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 2:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Silent One your too kind, your support and encouragement is really appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/22/2018 12:56:00 PM

Oh, poor Jack bruised more than his ego, Roy :) A smartly written and humorous limerick that's delightfully amusing. Loved it! Best wishes for a win, my friend. ~Susan

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Susan, I really appreciate your very kind comment and best wishes, getting these wonderful comments have really brightened up my day, thanks again for your support. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/22/2018 12:20:00 PM

Great limerick Roy, good luck in the contest. Kevin has got a hard task ahead that's for see sure. Tom

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 1:52:00 PM

Thanks Tom, never know what Kevin is looking for, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2018 12:06:00 PM

- Poor Jack ... dangerous snow and ice :) - Well done, Roy - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, really appreciated. :))

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/22/2018 10:37:00 AM

A lovely Limerick ... Good luck with the contest ...

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 10:47:00 AM

Thank you very much for your very kind comment Probir, really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/22/2018 10:29:00 AM

Great one Roy. Good luck in the contest :)

Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi for your best wishes, much appreciated. :))