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Beware the Witches' Spell

“Hey, look there Jim, the young girl said look at that rusty gate ahead? Do you think we should go through? I am game if you will too. We’ll have to clear these sticks away and find the latch, what’s that you say? you don’t think we should touch the gate what lies beyond might not be great. Oh, come on Jim, don’t be a wuss all it needs is one big push, then once we’re through we’ll walk the road it’s just your mind in overload.” And as they heaved the gate it fell releasing then the witches' spell, a spell held bound until the day this gate was opened by its prey. But these two children did not see what dangers lurked when innocently without a care stepped through the gate and with this action sealed their fate. At first, they heard a rumbling sound and swirling winds whipped all around, they both were lifted up so high and drawn so quickly through the sky. And with a thud they were set down inside a castle dark and brown. both trembling, cold, and full of fear “Just what had happened now we’re here?” A voice they heard; a cackle low the witch appeared to let them know, they’d live with her forever more no going back to life before. “Your days will now be one of toil you’ll cook and scrub, the cauldron boil, Oh, how I’ve waited for this day for foolish kids to come my way.” The girl said “Jim, I should have heard the warning in you spoken word, don’t touch that gate just let it be I wish I’d listened to your plea.” A tear rolled down her cheek, then fell upon the witch and broke her spell, for witches cannot deal with tears if splashed with one their spell it clears. And with a whoosh away they went back to the place were quickly sent, behind that gate and set on ground they both stood up and looked around. “Where have we been? I can’t recall but know that gate must never fall, so quickly we must run away I’ll not go through it, on this day.” So, if you see a gate ahead be careful now when through it tread, take care with life and gates you fell don’t end up in the witches' spell.

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Date: 10/20/2022 7:26:00 AM
What a fun story Christine! Perfect advice for any time of year...not just Halloween. :)
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Christine Watts
Date: 3/7/2023 1:04:00 PM
Hi Linda. Thank you for your review and sorry for very late reply. Yes I enjoy making up story poems and upon seeing an old fence this came to mind Cheers Christine
Date: 7/31/2022 8:05:00 PM
Full of enjoyment, especially when there are witches and spells involved. Moving on through each verse to read about what next, thank you for sharing.
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Christine Watts
Date: 8/2/2022 3:42:00 PM
Hi John thank you for your review it was a fun write and take care Cheers Christine
Date: 7/31/2022 2:51:00 PM
A riveting story Christine. Told in lilting prose, that makes the reader hurry to read what comes next. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Christine Watts
Date: 8/2/2022 3:43:00 PM
Hi Wendy Thanks for your review so glad you enjoyed my little story Take care Cheers Christine

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