Francine Roberts Poet Dodoitsu

Beware the Mosquito

high pitched buzzing in my ear

     mosquito lands on my arm

       slap at it before it bites

             too late, feel the pinch


Why did you choose to bite me ?

     other's more delectable

         if I was a mosquito

               I'd bite Don Johnson





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 Francine Roberts ( intended victim Don Johnson)
written for Linda Marie's contest  "Bite Me" , 08/04/2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 8:10 PM Congrats Francine! A great write. Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 11:52 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 15, 2012 at 1:55 AM Congratulations on your super win Francine xx

Gwendolen Song April 14, 2012 at 9:11 PM Congrats Francine..loved the ending the most...you should've slapped that bug faster.. haaha. Love, GWendolen

Joyce Johnson April 14, 2012 at 8:49 PM Pesky mosquito. Congratulations , Francine

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 8:48 PM hahaha,I love how you said, If I was a mosquito I'd bite don!!! congrats on your win, francine.

Deborah Burch April 14, 2012 at 8:07 PM Congratulations on your win Francine!! big hugs,love deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 7:27 PM congrats Francxine on sweet success for this sensational entry luv..

Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2012 at 2:21 PM You smell and tasted better than Don, Francine.- Luck to you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise