Samual Ronthorpe Poet Epulaeryu

Beware the Bomber

Beware the Bomber - Epulaeryu

They call them “Belly Bombers”
Onion steamed burgers,
They say to, “Take home a sack”,
Square, holey patties.
I ate too many,
And I got,
Sick!



Original poem written for the contest:
“Fast Food Epulaeryu”   ¤¤ 3rd Place ¤¤
Composed 4-28-2011

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Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2012 at 8:50 AM congrats on your featured poem of the week

Carol Sunshine Brown March 28, 2012 at 5:49 AM Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Samual. Love, Carol

Patrick Cornwall March 25, 2012 at 9:21 PM funny...congrats on feature..Patrick

Kathryn Collins February 18, 2012 at 10:32 AM Sounds like The White Castle to me. Thanks for the memories.

Jack Horne May 11, 2011 at 9:15 AM Even so, I'd have to try one! Many congratulations on your win, Samuel : )

Carol Sunshine Brown May 7, 2011 at 6:56 AM Congratulations Samual on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud May 7, 2011 at 2:29 AM flavorful, samuel... never mind if you got sick, lol... laurels for you for the vibrant win! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2011 at 8:46 PM way to go!! Congrats on your win, Samuel. I sure would like to try one.

Carolyn Devonshire May 6, 2011 at 2:35 PM Very witty, Samual. The "bombers" would make me sick too. Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn

Emma Buckeridge May 6, 2011 at 12:52 PM Well done on your win, congrats xx

Gautami Phookan May 6, 2011 at 12:02 PM Congrats Samuel on your well deserved win. A cute one with a nice ending. Some indigestion people have on eating too many!..

Kash Poet May 6, 2011 at 11:57 AM Haha this one is very humorous!Congrats Samual on your win--kash

Gwendolen Song May 6, 2011 at 8:14 AM You must be new to this site. I want to congratulate u on a well-written fast food poem. You wittingly expressed what many of us do-overeat the unhealthy stuff and then pay for it later! This was clever and fit your restaurant to a T. Bless you.

Nette Onclaud April 28, 2011 at 4:24 AM rib-tickling, sam... we really overeat at times! greeat stuff! winning wishes to you and congrats in my contest! :)hugggs