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Beware the Bomber

Beware the Bomber - Epulaeryu They call them “Belly Bombers” Onion steamed burgers, They say to, “Take home a sack”, Square, holey patties. I ate too many, And I got, Sick! Original poem written for the contest: “Fast Food Epulaeryu” ¤¤ 3rd Place ¤¤ Composed 4-28-2011

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Date: 3/29/2012 8:50:00 AM
congrats on your featured poem of the week
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Date: 3/28/2012 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Samual. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2012 9:21:00 PM
funny...congrats on feature..Patrick
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:32:00 AM
Sounds like The White Castle to me. Thanks for the memories.
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:15:00 AM
Even so, I'd have to try one! Many congratulations on your win, Samuel : )
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Date: 5/7/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations Samual on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:29:00 AM
flavorful, samuel... never mind if you got sick, lol... laurels for you for the vibrant win! :) huggs!
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:46:00 PM
way to go!! Congrats on your win, Samuel. I sure would like to try one.
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Date: 5/6/2011 2:35:00 PM
Very witty, Samual. The "bombers" would make me sick too. Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2011 12:52:00 PM
Well done on your win, congrats xx
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Date: 5/6/2011 12:02:00 PM
Congrats Samuel on your well deserved win. A cute one with a nice ending. Some indigestion people have on eating too many!..
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Date: 5/6/2011 11:57:00 AM
Haha this one is very humorous!Congrats Samual on your win--kash
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:14:00 AM
You must be new to this site. I want to congratulate u on a well-written fast food poem. You wittingly expressed what many of us do-overeat the unhealthy stuff and then pay for it later! This was clever and fit your restaurant to a T. Bless you.
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:24:00 AM
rib-tickling, sam... we really overeat at times! greeat stuff! winning wishes to you and congrats in my contest! :)hugggs
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