Beware the Beast

The mind of man defines his self
Thought separates him from the beast.
For rationale transcends all else
So with reason was man bequeathed?

Nature adjusts its balanced scales
Predators thrive upon their prey.
Quarry decays in mankind’s trail
Intellects cloth will sadly fray. 

Conceit sees but simple creatures
Instincts supply for lowly needs.
Hunter, hunted, duelling features
Equal basics provide life’s creed.

Man that looks finds natures evils
Perceptions mirror his within.
No beast shall cause earths upheavals
Just man will oblige earthly sin.
 
Smart man can plan tomorrow’s time
Consciousness learns from lessons past.
Hear and heed are two peaks to climb
Strides from missteps are often last.

Meek swallows will defend their nest
Grace transforms to obstinacy, 
But repose rewards a fruitful quest.
Vengeance just grasps humanity.

It’s man thats fought a thousand wars
Pleas to ignorance seldom thrive.
Nature’s pursuits have righteous core
A match for death means life survives.

The mind’s a mask of cunning guise
For closed minds, know not how they feast.
Heavy footsteps will cause demise,
and what sets man apart from beast?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/10/2016 9:20:00 PM
DEEP, INTELLIGENT AND VERY SMOOTH FLOW IN THE MESSAGE IN THIS FINE POEM. Title so suits the poem and its revelations. A7 and a fav for me... a pleasure to read tonight my friend.
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Mark Woods
Date: 2/14/2016 10:25:00 PM
Cheers Robert! I must admit I'm pretty happy with this one. I'm going through that eternal mind struggle of whether to continue to write or not and was thinking of taking the hatchet to a few of my poems but this one will stay.
Date: 1/25/2016 1:54:00 PM
My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Funom, sorry for the late reply. Life and work has been a bit hectic at the moment which combined for less time here.
Date: 1/10/2016 10:48:00 AM
How clever the comparisons are made - this is deep yet makes the distinctions obvious in a flow of poetic blows to so called intelligent mankind. Outstanding. Not long ago you wondered where your muse went, now we know - 'twas hither and tither gathering poetic ways to illustrate truths that need telling. I am most impressed by this, Mark. Another 7, 7 and 7 ... Petal
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:46:00 PM
I was chuffed with this poem because I did an 8 syllables per line write , managed to get meaning and had a bit of rhythm. In all honesty it is a poem I like more than the majority of my others. If I could write these all the time I would have found utopia.
Date: 1/3/2016 10:39:00 AM
how thought-provoking, mark... well done!..huggs
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:18:00 PM
Cheers Nette, hopefully you found something to ponder on, and hopefully mankind can stop with singleminded folly and realise the opinion of others and the earth need consideration.
Date: 1/3/2016 9:43:00 AM
Mark, this is mind blowing...
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:05:00 PM
Hopefully in a good way not in a psychedelic drug spin the room round way ; ) When I write these sort of poems I try to make people think.My thoughts may be wong but provided people have thought along the way I am happy.
Date: 1/3/2016 7:52:00 AM
One deep philosophical write... Well phrased and precise... Reading twice to enjoy... The flow and the write... Great work!
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:58:00 AM
I understand there is research now that suggests animals have more cognitive abilities than what we realise. Man does place himself above beast at his own peril
Date: 1/3/2016 5:57:00 AM
Well Mark, you basically described my man in toughts. To become that man, must be hard. I guess in a way the beast is a part of who we all are in the beginning. I still can't percept the person in front of me at times. Amazing.. Skat
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:43:00 AM
SKAT, firstly I am pleased to see you still here. God bless. : ) We have a lot to learn as people. Yet we seem to walk the path of arrogance, destroying our planet, neighbours and everything around us. Then we pat ourselves on the back and say how great we are.
Date: 1/3/2016 5:24:00 AM
G'morning, Mark. Lots of good phrases in this one. "Pleas to ignorance seldom thrive." True because the ignorant ones refuse to see that trait in themselves... Well done.
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Lin, I tried really hard to have every line as an individual thought provoking phrase. Independent of the one before but still part of the stanza and then poem. You picked that line perfectly that was exactly what I meant. : )
Date: 1/3/2016 3:47:00 AM
Deep and wise. A question each one must contemplate and reflect on. Very good write, Mark. Your poetry improved in leaps and bounds, even as it was already good when you started. Impressive!
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Date: 1/3/2016 3:53:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I've a long way to go but I'm learning. I'm still playing with different thoughts and styles. Quatrains may be the way forward for me as the structure suits but I"m floundering with the meter.
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