Betwixt Page and Poem

What separates a blooming rose from dead seed in a field? 
It's life! It's life, no man defines, creation's child and yet
The empty page, a piece of wood, a marble slab can yield, 
An art that bends the heart to joy, from feeling to vignette! 

Inspired! Inspired! That's what men say when soft and hard converge
And what's left standing's something new, yields love and poetry, 
Some colored lines, some clefts in stone, man's synapses engage, 
An image resurrects the past in fearsome symmetry.

Are God's strokes bigger, does He see imagination's end?
Is life a new experiment, fresh colors, poem's sound? 
Oh, does He marvel at man's art, not jealous, more a friend? 
Are we a twinkle in God's eye? These questions seem profound! 

Long Tooth
November 3, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/12/2018 1:11:00 PM
I like that last line. The Bible says, "He knew us before we were conceived in our mother's womb," Enjoyed reading your work. Since He knew me before I was born, He knows what I will write before I write it. He is an all knowing God. Sara
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Date: 11/13/2018 11:36:00 AM
Can God be all-knowing and still not know, experience surprise/pleasure at what His creation creates? I am created in His image and one of my greatest pleasures in life is the moment between not knowing and knowledge that becomes real. Can God's creation ever really be separate from Him? I suspect that every human being is a poem written by God Himself and that He delights in our creativity!
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