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Branches hanging low Often touching earth below Swapping what they know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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John Herlihy
Date: 5/6/2017 2:01:00 AM
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I've been finding rhymes in my haikus and tankas as well although I am told it is not de rigeur. Well done, again! The last line clinches the treat. John
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Lenna Walker
Date: 5/5/2017 1:41:00 PM
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A wonderful Haiku. I am reminded of reading how trees communicate with each other above and below ground. I love trees !! :)
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/5/2017 7:52:00 AM
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What a magnificently expressed thought and the picture you chose beautifully complements it:) Amitiés
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 6:48:00 AM
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Good Evening White Wolf. This is perfectly executed. We can see the imagery of the two meeting. I see a mini story here. Well done completely including the title. Have a wonderful night.
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John Michaels
Date: 5/4/2017 2:11:00 PM
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Lovely Haiku, WW! most impressed. Regards, John!
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 7:07:00 PM
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Thank you, John /|\
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/4/2017 11:27:00 AM
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I like how you wrote this! Well done :)
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 7:06:00 PM
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Thank you, Heidi /|\ Enjoy your day
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Miraj Raha
Date: 5/4/2017 10:11:00 AM
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Very cleverly written, WW.I love the meaning.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 7:06:00 PM
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Thank you, Miraj /|\
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/4/2017 8:03:00 AM
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A ballet of beauty
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 9:06:00 AM
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Thank you, Tim, my friend /|\
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/4/2017 7:06:00 AM
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WW I absolutely love the idea in your last line. A perfect Haiku and perfect picture to go with it! It is so Zen. I am Faving this! 7 ; )
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 9:05:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Connie /|\
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/4/2017 6:44:00 AM
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Love it. I for one do believe in plant intelligence ;) 7 xomo
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 6:47:00 AM
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Oh, without a doubt! All is mind! Mind is All! Thank you, Maureen /|\
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Chris Green
Date: 5/4/2017 6:27:00 AM
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Really cool my friend. I love that thought of the branches touching the earth and sharing wisdom.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 6:31:00 AM
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Yeah, I believe the trees fly through the birds and the birds are grounded by the trees too! Thanks, bro /|\
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Darren White
Date: 5/4/2017 4:36:00 AM
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What a lovely and intriguing haiku Budgie, I love it.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 4:50:00 AM
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The poem I did just before this is better! 'Unfold My Heart' Thanks mate /|\
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/4/2017 4:33:00 AM
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Very interesting last line which invites interested readers and says : Just see the clue, in what I am a haiku ...
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 4:36:00 AM
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Well stated dear, Probir! I like that a lot! Thank you /|\
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/4/2017 2:05:00 AM
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Brilliant my friend WW! A 7
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White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 2:06:00 AM
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Thank you very much indeed my friend! /|\

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