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Between Them:

Branches hanging low

Often touching earth below

Swapping what they know

Copyright © White Wolf | Year Posted 2017

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May 6, 2017 at 2:01 AM

I've been finding rhymes in my haikus and tankas as well although I am told it is not de rigeur. Well done, again! The last line clinches the treat. John

May 5, 2017 at 1:41 PM

A wonderful Haiku. I am reminded of reading how trees communicate with each other above and below ground. I love trees !! :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

May 5, 2017 at 7:52 AM

What a magnificently expressed thought and the picture you chose beautifully complements it:) Amitiés

May 5, 2017 at 6:48 AM

Good Evening White Wolf. This is perfectly executed. We can see the imagery of the two meeting. I see a mini story here. Well done completely including the title. Have a wonderful night.

May 4, 2017 at 2:11 PM

Lovely Haiku, WW! most impressed. Regards, John!

May 4, 2017 at 7:07 PM

Thank you, John /|\

May 4, 2017 at 11:27 AM

I like how you wrote this! Well done :)

May 4, 2017 at 7:06 PM

Thank you, Heidi /|\ Enjoy your day

May 4, 2017 at 10:11 AM

Very cleverly written, WW.I love the meaning.

May 4, 2017 at 7:06 PM

Thank you, Miraj /|\

May 4, 2017 at 8:03 AM

A ballet of beauty

May 4, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Thank you, Tim, my friend /|\

Connie Marcum Wong

May 4, 2017 at 7:06 AM

WW I absolutely love the idea in your last line. A perfect Haiku and perfect picture to go with it! It is so Zen. I am Faving this! 7 ; )

May 4, 2017 at 9:05 AM

Thank you so much, Connie /|\

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 4, 2017 at 6:44 AM

Love it. I for one do believe in plant intelligence ;) 7 xomo

May 4, 2017 at 6:47 AM

Oh, without a doubt! All is mind! Mind is All! Thank you, Maureen /|\

May 4, 2017 at 6:27 AM

Really cool my friend. I love that thought of the branches touching the earth and sharing wisdom.

May 4, 2017 at 6:31 AM

Yeah, I believe the trees fly through the birds and the birds are grounded by the trees too! Thanks, bro /|\

May 4, 2017 at 4:36 AM

What a lovely and intriguing haiku Budgie, I love it.

May 4, 2017 at 4:50 AM

The poem I did just before this is better! 'Unfold My Heart' Thanks mate /|\

May 4, 2017 at 4:33 AM

Very interesting last line which invites interested readers and says : Just see the clue, in what I am a haiku ...

May 4, 2017 at 4:36 AM

Well stated dear, Probir! I like that a lot! Thank you /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 4, 2017 at 2:05 AM

Brilliant my friend WW! A 7

May 4, 2017 at 2:06 AM

Thank you very much indeed my friend! /|\

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