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'between the Sheets'

heat produced with each stroke heighten senses exquisite prelude as passion ignites molten bodies become one with each kiss captivated by our love constant fire 140620111530 Contest: Double The Fun Tectractys 7th Place

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/9/2011 6:45:00 PM

Just had to check out what goes on here, now that I know I can say it is a super verse that expresses the passion so well!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 6:48:00 AM

Just had to stop by today and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Wilma. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2011 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

M. Alpestris

Date: 6/20/2011 7:50:00 AM

You surely kept it short and simple...and hot! Congratulations!

Mike Harms

Date: 6/19/2011 4:36:00 PM

i have to take a shower nicely done

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2011 3:38:00 PM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of chris, Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/19/2011 9:14:00 AM

I would honestly be soo surprised if this didn't win o_o! haha! So I am very happy that this won, missy! Super congrats to you for this hottie tetracty....(s) the s followed because it is slow-- nah. ok, ok because it was Sizzling...heehee I just wanted it to rhyme, lol :) mwahugs

Cory Long

Date: 6/19/2011 7:37:00 AM

congrats on your win with this fine piece cory

Kash Poet

Date: 6/19/2011 12:52:00 AM

This is a gem Wilma....congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2011 10:11:00 PM

Yeaaaahhhh. I am glad to see this on the list. I loved it. Congratulations, Wilma.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2011 10:01:00 PM

raving KUDOS to you for the special win,wilma! :) huggs

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/18/2011 9:31:00 PM

glad to see this steamy little number in the winners circle, congrats Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 6:08:00 PM

wow.. it's hot in here like Nelly sang ..haha.. exquisite Wilma.. good luck in the contest.. I am now overheated luv.. haha..

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/16/2011 4:35:00 PM

DAMN!!!!!!!! Seriously, good write. Vince

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/16/2011 8:02:00 AM

oh whoosh, whoosh, you sure got a steamy write here, missy , me thinks somebody will enjoy reading this one ;) you were asking me about what was written on the paper wrapped around the rock, haha I think I will return it back to you and say something's written between the sheets lol-- mwahugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/16/2011 10:18:00 AM

haha! go write it in better handwriting then-- oh, oops. ok, ok lights out for me, mommy! haha!

Wilma Neels
Date: 6/16/2011 8:29:00 AM

lol, it illegible Missy :D

James Foulk

Date: 6/15/2011 2:26:00 PM

so vivid, so creative, enjoyed this one Wilma, love your style.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/15/2011 2:12:00 PM

Guess I will meet you on the imaginary bridge, you bring the glasses and I got the wine...No fun alone luv... love Michael xoxo

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/15/2011 2:01:00 PM

Ok where is the cold shower!!!!! WOW my sweet dear Poet Partner in crime... My keyboard is steaming!!!! very nice and passion pours in every way possible..luv Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2011 10:12:00 AM

you light my fire, wilms... oh, chris will love this; so enticing!... winning wishes with huggs:) nette

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/15/2011 9:51:00 AM

Sensual and poetic...a good combination! A hot write, in more ways than one!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/15/2011 1:12:00 AM

Ow geee burning hot sizzling passion,he has to be a fireman Willma,hehe,love your sizzling post :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2011 10:30:00 PM

ooooh la la la. GOOD ONE

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/14/2011 10:53:00 AM

Passionate and riviting, Wilma! How wonderful it is to recall such feelings "Between the Sheets." No doubt this will be a winner! First tried this form last night and came up with five different tetractys quickly. Don't you just love this form? I'd never tried it before. Wishing you success as always, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Shani Fassbender

Date: 6/14/2011 10:39:00 AM

HOT! Good luck in the contest!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/14/2011 10:25:00 AM

Molten by the heat ..LOL:)Amazing write here Wlma...sure to be a winner..