'between the Sheets'

heat produced with each stroke heighten senses exquisite prelude as passion ignites molten bodies become one with each kiss captivated by our love constant fire
140620111530 Contest: Double The Fun Tectractys 7th Place
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Wesley Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Just had to check out what goes on here, now that I know I can say it is a super verse that expresses the passion so well!
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Just had to stop by today and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Wilma. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
Alpestris Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 7:50 AM
You surely kept it short and simple...and hot! Congratulations!
Harms Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:36 PM
i have to take a shower nicely done
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:38 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of chris, Wilma
K. Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:14 AM
I would honestly be soo surprised if this didn't win o_o! haha! So I am very happy that this won, missy! Super congrats to you for this hottie tetracty....(s) the s followed because it is slow-- nah. ok, ok because it was Sizzling...heehee I just wanted it to rhyme, lol :) mwahugs
Long Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:37 AM
congrats on your win with this fine piece cory
Poet Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 12:52 AM
This is a gem Wilma....congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Yeaaaahhhh. I am glad to see this on the list. I loved it. Congratulations, Wilma.
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 10:01 PM
raving KUDOS to you for the special win,wilma! :) huggs
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:31 PM
glad to see this steamy little number in the winners circle, congrats Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:08 PM
wow.. it's hot in here like Nelly sang ..haha.. exquisite Wilma.. good luck in the contest.. I am now overheated luv.. haha..
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 4:35 PM
DAMN!!!!!!!! Seriously, good write. Vince
K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:02 AM
oh whoosh, whoosh, you sure got a steamy write here, missy , me thinks somebody will enjoy reading this one ;) you were asking me about what was written on the paper wrapped around the rock, haha I think I will return it back to you and say something's written between the sheets lol-- mwahugs
K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 10:18 AM
haha! go write it in better handwriting then-- oh, oops. ok, ok lights out for me, mommy! haha!
Neels Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:29 AM
lol, it illegible Missy :D
Foulk Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:26 PM
so vivid, so creative, enjoyed this one Wilma, love your style.
Falotico Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Guess I will meet you on the imaginary bridge, you bring the glasses and I got the wine...No fun alone luv... love Michael xoxo
Falotico Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Ok where is the cold shower!!!!! WOW my sweet dear Poet Partner in crime... My keyboard is steaming!!!! very nice and passion pours in every way possible..luv Michael
Onclaud Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:12 AM
you light my fire, wilms... oh, chris will love this; so enticing!... winning wishes with huggs:) nette
Zzzzz Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Sensual and poetic...a good combination! A hot write, in more ways than one!
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Ow geee burning hot sizzling passion,he has to be a fireman Willma,hehe,love your sizzling post :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:30 PM
ooooh la la la. GOOD ONE
Devonshire Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Passionate and riviting, Wilma! How wonderful it is to recall such feelings "Between the Sheets." No doubt this will be a winner! First tried this form last night and came up with five different tetractys quickly. Don't you just love this form? I'd never tried it before. Wishing you success as always, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Fassbender Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:39 AM
HOT! Good luck in the contest!
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Molten by the heat ..LOL:)Amazing write here Wlma...sure to be a winner..
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