Get Your Premium Membership

Between Day and Night

Between the blue sprawl of day And the expired light of night, A seductive winding-down by a sky no longer drawn tight. Clouds wisp across a molten orb Like fingers over an amber eye, Steal sapphire from the sea, Leave a long spill of golden dye. The beach sips lapping water Lacquered in gray and white, Shows a slick of sand glowing, paved with dusk’s lamplight. Sun-shrilled colors muted by the moon’s proximity, Voices join a murmuring tide, Floating snippets of clarity. At water’s edge, two people Gazing out, front-lit, backs black, Moving to a spacious rhythm hidden in the waning sun’s slack. Scattered notes drift unhurried from a guitar strummed unseen. Or is it music only I hear? Ah, yes, so it would seem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/13/2017 9:23:00 PM
Your imagery always amazes me with its exotic flair and beauty. Your poem's pacing lets me take in the allure of your lovely lines in my imagination, and each line expands my perception of your poem's charm. Your second stanza is just stunning, especially "leave a long spill of golden dye'... that's golden poetry my friend. Enjoyed! :)
Login to Reply
Chan Avatar
Bernard Chan
Date: 10/14/2017 2:29:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! Glad you enjoyed it :))

Book: Shattered Sighs